~*~ "Is this merely a Visual fallacy Rippling Through our passion streaked, vivid minds, across Heated Planes of our souls?"~*~
Hot sultry nights...
Hot sultry nights, and the passion burns desires flow rivers, and we just yearn bodies awaken, to the rising heat slow hands feeding, within every beat gentle touches, we feel the need hands traverse, the span of you caressing affection, of coloured hue whilst our souls on fire burn so strong our bodies within where they belong creating the moment of complete surrender passionate love yet so tender rhythmic emotions and sensual motion lovers delight magical potion fuelling the quest the desires within we loose ourselves and then begin the explosive moment we reach the peak
exploring,
satiated,
replete!
(C) Elga B. August 2004 - All Rights Reserved
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Reviews of "Hot Sultry Nights ..."
Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2004
Another poem where I enjoy the flow and the imagery. You have a gift for making flow one thought flow seamlessly into another, pouring like liquid into the soul and senses…~DarkBard~
Elga, your brilliant mind never ceases to amaze me! You are an extremely talented human being and gifted Poetress, that has posted some of the most intense and purest passion pouring from your sacred quill, which I have read in awhile! Magnificent composition. Take care.
Words and visual combine to give a "Dance Of The Seven Veils" effect - tantalising, yielding and softly flowing with music and lyricism. Very beautifully expressed, Elga, and I just love the strength and conclusion of the last three lines: satisfied indeed! Well done, thankyou! Bon Appetit! Kate xx
HOT!
Susan
stirring the senses exploding the emotions! Brava, Elga!
Great write.
this is magnificent--pure passion just explodes from your pen! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Love Tinka
Done with tenderness and deep emotion Elga
Peter