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Steamy windows ...
Steamy windows like mornings misted dew trickling, as sunshine greets the hungry morn reaching out stretching touching allowing it to envelop me feel the flowing warmth seeping slowly and radiating through me touching nerves sinews and coursing veins awakening the senses gently titilatingly tantilizingly
Invigorating the mind inspiring indescribable thoughts kindling emotions quietly caressing restoring the soul reverberating remembered emotions stimulating the heart strumming silently silver threads rousing the body renewing the appetent desire reeling electric energizing pure tonic
creating the scene of a lucent mind !
Copyright Elga B August 2004 -
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Reviews of "Steamy Windows.... ~*~"
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2004
So well done and greatly enjoyed. Flows beautifully.
I enjoy the flow of this piece, the rhythm; how one thought flows seamlessly into one another, pouring like liquid into the soul…~DarkBard~
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2004
I couldn't help thinking of Tina Turner's song of that same
title, when I saw yours on the list page.
A beautiful piece of writing, Elga! Far more class and
elegant thoughts than the lyrics of that pop song.
This is a unique and beautifully depicted take on Steamy Windows, Elga; they are so often portrayed instead as indicative of stupor or clandestine activity!! This particularly strikes a chord with me as you have put your finger on a similar association that I make with any sort of steam or vapour rising... one of emergent energy and new possibility - a freshness instead of staleness. This write is, as you say, pure tonic! TY Kate xx
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
The songs and art in this book are about our collective emergence after the pandemic and trauma of the last few years - comprised of 5 collections: World as Refuge, Where We Live, In Our Hands, Rhythms of Change and What We See & Sow.
Now that song is rattling around lol.
Ok, ( shaking head to sensibility) That was an incredible, luxurious sensual write, TY
~Contesse~
delightfully captivating poetry!
breathtakingly beautiful! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Love Tinka
title, when I saw yours on the list page.
A beautiful piece of writing, Elga! Far more class and
elegant thoughts than the lyrics of that pop song.
The pic here is just a red cross..
Peter
Brava!
like mornings misted dew
trickling,
as sunshine
greets the hungry morn
reaching out
stretching
touching
allowing it to envelop me
Elga...You have written a classic write here filled with robust imagery and descriptions....clap clap clap....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!
Sandie May Angel
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reg.