Like a Rose ... (poem) by ~Indigo~ Elga on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

Agree with Vesna - I can relate....
Excellent poem

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

I can relate to this my friend..as I can relate to many of the thoughts expressed by so many of my dear AD friends..I thank you for expressing that which churns within me..bless you..

vesna :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

A rose is a rose in whatever shape, form or state. The more they are crushed and their petals are spread around, the more their true beauty and fragrance is released and transmits an aura which permeates the atmosphere far more than would be possible by just their single, unified presence. How many of us - male and female - can relate to the sadness poetically and eloquently expressed in this lyrical write, Elga. This flows from an abundant, giving heart and feeds and nourishes many hungry souls. We are not alone in this loneliness and self-worth is always an issue for spirits that are truly humble. Sadly, many of us, I think, hear the "lies" rather than the "truth" about ourselves - even if some ARE kind enough to be telling us time after time. And, even if our head tells us "good" things, the journey of taking this information to a damaged heart may take a lifetime. But it IS wonderful when we arrive! Gorgeous visual, too. Your questions relate to many, I am sure, and reminds me of the character, Beth: the gentle, quiet, "serving" sister in "Little Women". Bless you for this. Kate xx

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Elga, this is another timeless treasure, which confirms my earlier review, my friend. Although this one has deep heartfelt emotions pouring off pages, nevertheless it leaves the door open for an individual to make a comeback from the darkest reaches in ones soul. Many times throughout ones life there are dreary moments when the overwhelming desire to just chuck it all, and throw in the cards but my friend, one can only play the hand that�s dealt them and continue marching forward. This powerful piece reaches into the very depths of ones soul and grabs them by the collar, at least for the ones who are capable of realizing that more often than not without speaking before thinking will cause another human being momentous harm must not do it. For you are so right my friend, one word could and can make all the difference in another�s life. Fantastic composition. Thank you for sharing your outstanding talent. Take care.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Elga...a breathtakingly moving piece of poetry, after the wound the healing begins...Fletcher B

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Movingly expressed ponderances, Elga. A positive outlook and strong sense of self esteem are priceless for attaining a sense of harmony and balance in one's brief time on Planet Earth. Well penned.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Heartfelt writing touches the soul~*

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

A sad but excellent write. Heartfelt. Trish.

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Very sad:( But shows the willingness to get up and flower again:)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

the poem speaks from the wounded heart but i always assert that nothing anyone says should influence the wonder and beauty of our thoughts and actions ...

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Elga, these thoughts are penned with the heart of a compassionate soul. This was so beautifully done. The art work made me think of a song..."The Spanish Rose Of Harlem"
Beautiful in every way.
Allen

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

I think if one really knew more than are happy in my opinion this is excellent.... Elga.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Very nice.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Very honest and forthright poem Elga
Yes we should help each other as much as we can along the road of life...
Peter

Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Yes, excellent write...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Oh boy!!

What more can I say!!

Skiet hom in die hol Paul pa wil die vel heel h�!!

Het jy aan my gedink...dit voel so?

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

(((elga)))

excellent write--it takes only one word to destroy a person's self worth...and only one to make their day :) as one who has felt the sharp thorns of verbal assaults, i applaud you for posting this thought provoker.

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

I know many times I have felt like this to answer your question.
Walked upon trampled over,, yep been there.
Nice write
Tommy

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

The message in the poem, the beautiful pic are so wonderful

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Gracious words for a lady of grace :)! Thanks for sharing and also for reading me :)!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Superb poem of beauty and grace, with excellent message!
This is a gorgeous presentation!