~*~ Guess I am being a little cheeky today. This is a repost, it's one of the first ones that I posted when I joined ~~ for those that have read and commented a HUGE hug and thanks and for those that haven't I sincerely hope you will enjoy~*~
I believe the cyber gremlins have been at it again, I think a need a patrol around, to keep them in check. ;)
Warm hugs and love
Elga ;)
Love
Love is the sunrise the sunset. It’s the twinkle in your eyes. It’s the ocean and big blue sky. It’s this feeling deep inside. The moments of elation joy and celebration Desire that ignites the fire of passion and pleasure Eyes meeting briefly. Hands scarcely touching. Lips barely brushing. Soul hardly breathing. Hearts aflutter.
Kindness in your sentiments affection and tenderness.
Sunrise in your arms, a golden glow. Sunset in your comfort, a euphoric tone. Ocean is your heart, with its vastness. Sky your emotions, with its hues.
The air that you breathe. The light in your eyes. The rays of the sunlight, within my mind.
Elga thank you fro reposting it's a glorious piece of work!
Something to be proud of, beautifully expressed!
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
Elga...how did I miss this one, it is very beautiful...this type of message belongs on a card that lovers can give to one another...seriously you should contact Hall Mark...the message is very spiritual and soul made. and deserves to be read and read...beautiful...Fletcher B
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
I like the short lines- I think sometimes brevity has more of an impact than 10,00o words to describe something which then loses its meaning because there is so much description to concentrate on. Good job! P.S. Thanks for your comments on my kitty poem:)
Describing love is almost impossible, but you have done a wonderful job here. Very good write and so descriptive of the way love does make one feel. Your writing style is such a joy to read.
I guess I will add this to my collection of comments re "what is love", if you don't mind. It's a perfect description.
Great write
PS: Love that photo in your bio
Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
Mmmm...this poem is beautiful; soft and light, like love first born...~DarkBard~
Elga, although I unfortunately did not have the privilege of reading this extraordinary composition the first time around, I am grateful for having the opportunity to benefit from it now. It is no wonder that you are one of my favorite Poet’s on the site. You and your priceless creations bring a lot of joy and stimulation to the readers and admirers, which I am one of them. You have obviously put a tremendous amount of effort into your timeless work to prepare these spectacular masterpieces to bring the poetic table for all to feast upon. I anxiously await the next treasure you are willing to share. May the gentle winds of the Creator’s grace, comfort, and keep you and yours healthy and safe throughout your journey through time and space. Thank you for sharing your magnificent inspirational marvels with us. Take care my friend.
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Something to be proud of, beautifully expressed!
Sherry
Great write
PS: Love that photo in your bio
and stated so perfectly!
Love Tinka
this is absolutely gorgeous! a gold medal performance :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Peter
Great sneiments!
Susan