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then the lips
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 ....then the lips

I desire upon a falling star
so near it falls and yet so far
I long to see this one to fall
so to give, my heart my all.


I've been waiting patiently,
is there no passionate electricity?
I gaze up into the skies and see
one bright star illuminating me.


Looking up it's burning bright
does it watch me every night?
moon and stars all breeze by
give me wings I want to fly.


Kiss its eyes, then the lips
taste sweet nectar with tiny sips
fulfil desires and inner glow
let your tender love seep... and flow.



Copyright Elga B
August 2004 - all rights reserved

 

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 Reviews of "then the lips"
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 27, 2004
I gaze up into the skies and see
one bright star illuminating me.

Some say we each have our very own star in the sky - and perhaps yours inspired this lovely piece. Lovely graphic, too.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Elga, your work in this piece outshines the very stars that you so tenderly speak of. Your work is a pure delight to read.
Allen

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
soft and mysterious, like a baby peach with a question

well done Elga

joy and more joy
HH

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Beautiful write!

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Elga,

This is another extremely beautiful creation of yours! The poetry is flawless and the artwork compliments it perfectly! I love the softness and the flow of love and passion in this glorious write! I have read much of your poetry posted here on AD and find that you are truly a gifted poet! Thank you for sharing you magnificient talent!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Elga...this is awesome...your ryhme metre carrys it through flawlessly...I love the smoothness of this poetry. These are my two most favourite verses:

Looking up it's burning bright
does it watch me every night?
moon and stars all breeze by
give me wings I want to fly.

Kiss its eyes, then the lips
taste sweet nectar with tiny sips
fulfil desires and inner glow
let your tender love seep... and flow

This one is romantic, mysterious and dreamy...Fletcher B

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
this very passionate poem seeps in the heart's domaine ...

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Sensual and enchanting Elga..
In a class of its own...
Peter

Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Great work Elga

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Excellent art and poetry! Is the art your own? It's fantastic!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
very beautiful work.........ty, Dani

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Elga, I could easily post the same review I put up last night for this magnificent composition, yet due to the fact that each one of your timeless creations are truly works of art, this deserves its own my friend. This dramatic arrangement encapsulates the full spectrum of how sensual poetry when well-crafted will move the reader beyond the page and drift deep through and into the rivers of the mind. It is a necessary function of poetry to take your readers and admirers on the divine journey throughout the emotional perplexity and into the heavenly stars in the sacrosanct quest to savor, if even only for a moment the bliss that surrounds ones soul when they find that sanctified place. Elga, you know as well as I do, there will always be times in ones life when it seems like the world is imploding all around, yet to be able to share your gift will ensure someone tonight will lay their head upon their fully pillow and be transformed into the stratosphere of delight by reading this everlasting wonder. Thank you for sharing your work. Take care.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
oh so softly sensual, but with energetic passion!
Scintillating poem Elga!cosmic beauty!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Wonderful write.

Reviewed by David Anthony
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Elga

Beautifully done!! I love the visuals in the night sky.....keep em coming.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Quite enchanting..

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Great love poem so wonderfully expressed

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Simply beautiful Elga!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
I simply must agree with Chanti on this one...lovely poem...
lovely graphic to highlight it...and a treasure to 'keep.'

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Elga, this is exquisite! Your talent is showcased so beautifully by the wonderful choice of graphics.
I know I've told you this in person but I wanted to record here that I think you're the queen of Sensual poetry.
Chanti


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