Silent Lonely Place (poem) by ~Indigo~ Elga on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2004

Can relate.
You again seem to speak out of my heart.
Time will heal, and a new love will.
I will pray for your strength to go on and find your light.
Amira

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson

Reviewed on September 1, 2004

Painful but so powerful and full of emotions. The beauty of this poem is that it expresses so well how most of us have felt at some point in our life. Your words reach out and touch hearts that hurt in exactly this manner. I look forward to the day you can write another one, telling us the beauty of how a new love can change the way we feel inside and out!

Sherry

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 1, 2004

Sad but beautifully written.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 1, 2004

though your heart is heavy, your poem transforms ...

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Heartfelt. Wonderful expression.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Elga, so sorry this is based in truth for you. A powerful, emotional poem. There is light here for you and those who would not devalue who you are. Blessings and peace, Dawn

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Elga, this is an exceptional painful poem beautifully written.
I have always said indifference and ignoring someone is
sometines more abusive than any other.In fact I once wrote
that it was like being shunned without a reason, very disturbing
and hard to deal with.YOu have to reach deep inside and find your
strength and self awareness of your worth. then boldly toot your own horn don't let anyone demean you...(((hugs))) love Eileen

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

"Although the world is full of suffering, it is full also of the overcoming of it."

"Character cannot be developed in ease and quiet. Only through experience of trial and suffering can the soul be strengthened, ambition inspired, and success achieved."
Helen Keller

A very gripping write, whenever I'm feeling down, I read some Helen Keller's quotes and it picks me right up. I like the way she doesn't sugarcoat anything.

Peace

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Easy to tell you to turn it off...understand completely what it feels like...outlook - all things do pass...within you is a place of strength and perserverance...i'm sending you a hug. (hug)

Amy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Painful reality for me and as you know I can relate to this Elga!!

Take care sweet friend...!!

Very heartfelt piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

youve expressed sadness with so much emotion

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Elga, your poem bears the weight of your heart. There are many lonely places waitng to conquer us. Just keep writing your wonderful poetry and keep thinking happy thoughts. Failing all that, go out and buy yourself something really expensive. I guarantee you will feel so much better...excellent depth in this poem dear poet...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

This was so sad, I hate it when bad things keep happening,it just wears your spirit, excellent expression of this terribly hopeless feeling,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Elga, an exceptionally well composed heart-wrenching write my friend. It�s a shame too many people are hurt in this world, but especially when I see someone I care for, my heart just breaks. You are NOT worthless! Priceless YES! The sun shall shine again my friend. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

A hurting and painful write Elga...that is both gut wrenching and stomach churning....
When we are down...we must remind ourselves of our worth and value...no one else will...and bounce back renewed and full of zest and vigour...
Our future happiness depends on our resilence to endure the hard times..until deliverance comes...in whatever shape or form...
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Sad write, but good

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

We surely all do have good and bad times, Elga. And the bad times definitely can be very bad. Sorry to hear you are in a bad time, and truly hope the good times reappear soon.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

A heartwrenching write that too many women go through.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

if that golden gate is a symbol of strength where you can be renewed.....by all means go for it......if its symbolic.....if its a place of doom....take a right turn and don't look back.....make a pledge to yourself to be strong.....do it....mark the days on your calender that you don't cry......give yourself a star sticker or something...draw a little picture or something......I've been down....everyone has......everyone has been victimized and hurt.....and has felt utterly bewildered and torn.....but things can change........the end of one thing......marks the beginning of another.......now if i am reading too much into this poem, i do apolgize and will jump off this soap box

pax........
A
:)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Such a sad, emotive write Elga. Beautifully expressed.