Thought Explosion....
Confusion, confusion, My mind's in confusion, Delirious with thoughts, odd and weird, racing through my mind, which leaves me weak yet excited
Visions I see, but blurred and uncharacteristic. My feelings are all mixed emotions, in a wild sea of turmoil, tossing and turning, heaving and then receding, crashing down with a thunderous explosion, while my senses are reeling, my mind is spinning turning, turning, not wanting to stop, my head is heavy, my spirits are soaring, delving into things unknown, travelling with velocity, not wanting to stop and yet, wanting to stop, but on I go seeing unrealistic objects, strange and new to me, I'm high, so high, dancing on the wings of the wind, then suddenly, floating along, on the magic of the soft feathery clouds.
Magic, what unbelievable serenity. I'm slipping slowly, then suddenly, I'm coming down, with a fantastic speed.
Help ! all too quickly, I touch reality, I'm back again, back, I wait, for my next magical trip....
Copyright Elga ~Indigo~ 2004 - all rights reserved 25 June 1981
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Great poem for a start.
your style is prevalent. May you never stop writing.
Has stood the test of time well..
Love
Peter
o, this is GORGEOUS, both art and pic--wild energetic piece with vivid emotions that linger long after the poem is read--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
journey you took us on with this one Elga! I love it!;-)
though I'm a bit dizzy;-) LOL
Reindeer