The settings of quiescent dreamscapes
Billow upon our hearts
Like waves of truth
Reaching out, stroking,
Gently caressing slumbering senses
Like a branch on a partially opened window
Swaying to the wind
Casting its shadows
Upon the portholes of our memory
From an aperture in the clouds
Our souls emerged enamored
Amidst the shaded hues
Of thought's riches
Flourishing with sentiments
Levitating above the thunder
Of a storm that is yet to be born
And a desire to recreate the heavens
Copyright Jude (Ace) & Elga
5 November 2004 - All Rights Reserved
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Reviews of "A Storm of Heavens Collab. Jude (Ace) & Elga"
A truly beautiful pen Elga. I see your still as great as ever
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2004
Elga, this is about as close as one could hope to get to Heaven without dying first! Outstanding collaboration! Your combined talents have created a timeless Masterpiece! I’ll agree with Poetess Chanti, on the closing to this remarkable piece. Thank you for sharing your work. You two have done an excellent job! Take good care and be well.
My congratulations to both Elga and Jude for a superb collaberation. I would be hard pressed to share my favourite lines but I have to admit that the ending does it for me:
"...Of a storm that is yet to be born
And a desire to recreate the heavens"
Passion is one thing but only love can take you to heaven.
I highly recommend another collab. for the two of you. You work well as a team.
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! stunning collaborative that sets the heavens ablaze!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Peace and sunshine
"...Of a storm that is yet to be born
And a desire to recreate the heavens"
Passion is one thing but only love can take you to heaven.
I highly recommend another collab. for the two of you. You work well as a team.
In admiration... Chanti
Whew!
Elegant, Elga...and Artistic Ace...a volatile combo.
Take care,
Sherry
Sandie May Angel :o)
Beautiful collaboration! An eloquent, passionate write. Bravo, you two! Thanks for sharing your combined talents!
Cynthia
Lisa