I Will Triumph In Christ (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 22, 2006

This is such a magnificent poem, it's hard to think of words to describe it. Pray for the peace of Jerusalem, we are told.
Little Jerusalem.....Mighty God Thank you for your insights into God's covenant people and covenant plan.
Connie F.

Reviewed by rachel baughman (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

How graphically beautiful this piece is. It is like our life's battle to understand what we can not comprehend but to fight because we know the truth we feel in our hearts. Your words here have embraced my spirit and brought out something not felt in a long time. VERY beautiful.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Most powerful offering Peter!!

Thank you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

A strongly penned shout of triumph! Well done, Soldier for Christ!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

I told you that you were a great warrior and this proves it! So wonderfully worded and powerful as ever dear Peter. Love Panda :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Reminds me of that bestseller, The Holy Blood And The Holy Grail. And somehow my thoughts turn as well to Freemasonry and the film National Treasure with Nick Cage... aaaaaaaahhhh!! Here's why!! :)) This is a soldier's manifesto and no mistake. Very classical. Very Peter. Very well done. And I STILL need to check out some historical facts... TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

A Dragon Slayer, and an ancient Crusader - you do get around, Sir Peter of Scotland.

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

"for Jerusalem will never be divided or surrendered..."
Powerful words for such a time as this.
You rock, Peter!

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

What a magnificent piece you have penned here, Peter. In my studies, I devoured Ancient and Medieval history...and the crusades. You've captured the spirit and meaning in this outcry of the followers of Christ as you align with the brave in their celebration of the right to worship him. Such a powerful tribute, it left me engrossed.

Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

nicely done

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

The sand is white and along the center there is a line. It approaches and we will decide at the last minute for some. For me...I am a Christian. I admire the way you approach the future Peter and the way you message to us without the fire and brimstones. More listen to you I believe.
I do.
Susan

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

Beautiful write here Peter, write on and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

An excellent construct Sir Peter, covering much, and doing so with the panache of a gentleman and a scholar.

I agree, the lines are being drawn in all walks.

Excellent image, very romantic, and piques the imagination!

Kudos!
Richard the Intrepid

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

Most beautiful done!
B&R

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

Amen! You have said it all Peter!What a glorious tribute to our Creator and superb expounding of history and reason that we do stand tall for the truth and all those who will defend it to the death! I proudly stand with you!Thank you Peter!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

DITTO DITTO and DITTO, RHONDA'S REVIEW I agree totally with her words, why repeat them, wouldn't change a thing YAY TEAM!
Peter; The Rock! ROCK-Salt!!

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

PRAISING JESUS, OUR MOST-HIGH GOD, AND DECALRING HIS SOON-RETURN!!!

PETER, WHAT JOYOUS BELLS ARE SOUNDING, WHAT FAINTED HEARTS ARE POUNDING ..........YOU HAVE SET THE TONE, AND LOCKED THE GAIT....
NOW, VIGILANTLY, WE WAIT..........

IN STEP, WE BELIEVERS TROD.........EVER-FORWARD ......TO DEFEND OUR GOD!!!

UNTIL HE RETURNS ~ I WALK IN STEP WITH YOU!!!

MOST EXCELLENT OF ALL YOUR WORKS!!! SALVATION IS BEAUTIFUL ON YOU!!!

CONTINUED LOVE&HUGS&PRAYERS, RHONDA

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

Right Write On...

TRASK

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

This is fantastic and as I am not a very religious person I was going to pass on this one but I am truly glad I did not. As a lover of history and religious history especially I enjoyed this tremendously. Very nice piece of work my friend.

Fee

Reviewed by Jacquelynne Haycook

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

An absolutely beautiful write!!! I was brought up devout Christian, so this poem really hit home for me. I loved it!!!