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Scratch The Surface
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Scratch the Surface


 


I saw a teen girl who laughed to loud


We all though he a little crazy


We didn’t scratch her surface


We were just a little lazy


 


Then when they found the note


Our guilt was hard to bear


Her laughter was her cry for help


From the abuse she lived in fear


 


 


A senior never complained of life


The way society let him down


Always had a friendly word for all


You’d never seen him wear a frown


 


When he died they found the cans


Of pet food in his kitchen cupboard


We didn’t scratch his outer ego


It was much easier left ignored


 


 


I went to lunch with an old friend


He called me out of the blue


Said her life was going great


I guess I wanted to believe it too


 


When the final divorce papers came


They found her lying all alone


Perhaps if I’d scratched a little deeper


She may have picked up her phone


 


The lord gives us lots of chances


To reach out to each others hearts


We may have to scratch the surface


Find a way to reach their hurting parts


 


Like Jesus did on his road to Cavalry


He scratched the surface often


Let him be an example to us all


The load of others we may soften.


 


 


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Scratch The Surface"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Nicely done Felix...good to have a friend to talk to!!

Sometimes a little scratching may open up some healing wounds...and starts to bleed again!!

But as the doctor says sometimes bleeding is a good thing...it drains the poison!!

Thanks for listening!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sandy Knauer
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Very nice, Felix. Gave me a chill and made me scratch my arm. Hopefully, I'll remember to scratch others more. Great message.

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Ooh, this is so beautiful and touching, Felix! I wonder what would be found if my surface was scratched. Jokes aside, it takes such little time to see that surface - if we do care enough - and just as little time to polish it and make one feel good about herselves.

God bless, Felix.

Sandie.

Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Felix,

A most thought provoking, telling poem of empathy; you and I are on the same page today. 'Course, mine's a little...harsher...LOL Yours is beautiful; thank you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed on June 23, 2005
excellent!

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
felix this is great...i am guilty of letting a friend go because she was too much work emotionally and i have always regretted it...things that are worth while, like scratching more than the surface, requires a little work


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