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someone
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someone got lost along the way

someone time refused to stay

someone lost the will to play

someone didn't know what to say

someone really wanted love to last

someone saw it slipping fast

someone knew their fate was cast

someone cried as love slipped past

someone walks new halls unknown

someone just ignores the phone

someone now has a brand new home

someone now cries in the dark alone



 

someone please take a moment in time

someone please tell me if you're mine

 
 

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Reviewed by Meredith Dixon (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2006
Dear Felix, This seems so real and I can envsion those empty halls and they sound so mournful. I just was told of a possible divorce from my daughter earlier today and their little girl is devastated. Wish they could read this and rethink their decision. But I guess it does take both to make it work. Beautiful but sad. Glad you wrote it though!!! Love from Meredith

Reviewed by Damaa --
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
I like this :-) Simple and concise.

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
A thought provoking write, Felix. profound and well crafted.

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
very well written!

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
Powerful lines and expressions the heart is a place that matters thank you for posting this poem.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
Felix,
We all suffer from the not sure bug once in a while and we have to be reassured that all is well on every aspect of our lives.
It will pass.

Lisa

Reviewed by Shoma Mittra
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
So very eloquent.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 11, 2006
someone is in trouble.....count me in and it makes double trouble....!!

thanks for sharing Felix!!

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on January 11, 2006
Heartbreaking, and eloquent. Great Job Felix. Michelle

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 11, 2006
Eloquent in style, Eloquent in sincerity, elequent in the sorrow that is perceived by the loss of a love.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on January 11, 2006
Sad. You captured this one perfectly.

Reviewed by dusty petal (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2006
Wow another great one Felix ........one that i can relate to,, all to well!!


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