She Could Cry (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

She Could Cry
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Song lyrics I am working on...
She Could Cry She could dance, and her swaying body was a true delight *She could smile, and her smile could light the darkest night* *She could speak, and her voice like an angel stilled the air* *She was min,e and I didn�t know that she was even there* *Chorus:* *I didn�t see the things that she could do* *I did�t know then I�d feel this damn blue* *I didn�t think that she could hold me heart* *I gave up heaven when I tore her world apart* *She could sing, along with the radio and sound so sweet* *She could hold me, hold me in her arms as I floated off my feet* *She could soothe me, when the fire of anger floated in my heart* *She could saved me, from hell when I didn�t even know where to start* *She could offer me tomorrow, in a thousand ways I couldn�t understand* *She could say she loved me, and I�d be a fool to let go of her hand* *She could cry as I turned, I cruelly turned and walked a way* *She could cry when I left her, but it�s me that�s crying here today.*

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 5, 2006

I am impressed by the depth of feeling of this song. Very fine, Felix...

Lin

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

Fantastic!

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

A wonderful emotional write (song)!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by jude forese

you have the ability to move our emotions as you open your heart and soul ...

superb song, Felix ...

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 3, 2006

Felix,

A heartfelt, beautifully moving ballad; well done! Would make a terrific song.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)

beautiful emotive write.

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)

heart touching and well written.

Reviewed by George Carroll

This is a remorseful ballard with much truth in it for those who were too blind to see true love. Excellent Felix ,you have penned a gem worth keeping in this sad but wonderful song.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Totally floored by the sadness of the message, Felix, but this song is also totally fab and can't wait to hear it played... as dear Floria Kelderhouse used to say... probably still does!! ... "Pain makes the pen fly!" Seriously, I think this must be one of your best all-round compositions... and I have yet to hear the music!! :)) Hope you're well, Pops xx K xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

It is a song the meaning of which I can relate to, Felix. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Beautiful song Felix!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Felix, This tears at my romantic side. There is a yearning/pining here that will never see conditioning. So true to the heart that aches and so many will read this and identify with the words. Where have you been lately Felix?
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by A PAX

This is lament.......its not a woe is me ditty.......

truely written...........it makes me feel it :)

is it cw, or just a ballad?

I would love to hear this played, can u put it on the site when you have it completed? you should...........!!
pax A

She Could Cry

She could dance, and her swaying body was a true delight