Aha!! You had me going there... oooo, yes, the thrill of the illicit... but, as you perhaps subtley suggest, in the mind is where it all starts... and is it AS bad if it also stops there??? Hmmmm.... doubtless a hot potato and I am, of course, playin devil's advocate here... not that he needs one... we seem to do a pretty good job on our own, one way or another! Mindboggling write, Pops... honest, though. TY Kate xx
This is great, Felix. The 2- & 3-syllable lines create a great
flow and a lot of snap. Following up with four-syllable words
that are different in tone and feel from what goes before
is inspired, in my opinion. Mad, sad, and slightly funny, like
a relationship -- most any relationship, but where it comes
to romance, h-e-l-p. Thanks for posting this gem. <3 Pea <3
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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excellent write
Birgit and Roger
pax A
Love tinka
Susan
flow and a lot of snap. Following up with four-syllable words
that are different in tone and feel from what goes before
is inspired, in my opinion. Mad, sad, and slightly funny, like
a relationship -- most any relationship, but where it comes
to romance, h-e-l-p. Thanks for posting this gem. <3 Pea <3
I like this part of your creativity.
Susan
Much to read in succinct, thought provoking verse. A poem with a profound lesson. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.