There can't be a final curtain on a hit like this!!

Love ya!

Jane

NEVER End it....
Good things must LAST Foreverrrr!
YOur ideas provokes deep thoughts!
I'm around and YOu KNow it FEE....Let me know...
You're in my thoughts and prayers!
This write sounds like a writer trying to find a minds ending
Warm HuGs,Warrior Sheeeoxxo

We all need to have absolution to move forward in life. Lovely poem you have shared with us.

~hugs~
Karen

Never quit my friend, hang on till the bitter end, and even then go out screaming!

A wonderful thought provoking write...

Carole

Everything we do in life leads to the final absolution, I like how you put this together Felix.Thank you for sharing it with us.
Love your Cuz, Rose, XOXO

Very deep write, evident that your emotions run deep...it sounds as though you are tired, sometimes when we think we are ready to take that final bow, we get up with a surge of energy and a renewal that takes us another mile, I agree with Victor our final absolution should be the ultimate goal of making it home...Heaven! Great write very thought provoking and stirring.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Life does at times throw wicked curves at us and though we swing we don't get a hit. But Like the ball player there are nine innings in the game and some times the pitcher gets knocked out of the box. Life is like that I think. We find some predicaments that seem unsurmountable but when we explore all avenues there is always one that can be taken that can lessen or resolve that which we face. But it takes our full attention to investigate the course of action that will lead to this avenue of relief. Keep swinging the game is far from over.

Your sadness is evident and your consciousness is flirting with mortality. Although your poem is one of your best I'm more concerned with you. Take a day at a time. You know you can always talk to me.

Love,
Susan

A vivid description of an unaltering reality. Well crafted scene. Excellent write. R

This is awesome Fee and i agree with Victor on this one absolution. :)
Peace,
Joselyn

"I give it all and take my bow
an offering of my very soul"

What more can we ask from ourselves, Dear Fee?

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Thought provoking write Felix!!

Love Tinka

We should all work towards final absolution. Repentance is what we need. Great poem. Victor

well written and intriguing-

Interesting take on this Felix...well done to say the least.

Allen

Life's lessons are intricate indeed and you induce the reader to take stock. A contemplative pen Fee and thoroughly enjoyable to read. Love Panda:)

Excellent, thought provoker you have penned here, Fee; great writing! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

It's funny the decisions we make how they predict your future.
Well done,
God Bless,
Michael

An amazing poem, indeed, Fee; your soul and words live on in immortality. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

This is an amazing poem. We all make choices in our life that change the very being of who we are. I have learned the past always comes up in the future somehow, but somehow we just have to make peace with it and know we are better because of it. Love this poem
Outstanding visuals
Excellent Imagery And Flow!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star

I enjoyed this, Felix~