Re-United Laughter Rings (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Re-United Laughter Rings
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Sort of continuation of the Underwear Poem theme...
Re-United Laughter Rings By Felix L. Perry Twilight in the land of shattered dreams A lonely heart stands forgotten so it seems Dancing to a waltz no one else can hear She remembers how he held her near Sunset beaches of white virgin sand Lover�s hearts walked hand in hand Tired, her face wears signs of age History forgot her mortal page Shivers as she feels the evening chill Pulls close her sour coat of English twill Turns dejected walks the barren shore Wishing to see him just once more The way things were when he was real Too late now, his name marks a grave Love of life gone on Deadman�s Turn Three score more to yearn and yearn They found her on the beach that day Tossed to and fro by the waves that play A black and white photo tightly gripped Coroner said she must have slipped Yet sometimes in the chill damp mist Just before that corner where they kissed You can hear the laughter now of two Together again found love all new!

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2007

Aw, Fee, ya need to issue a "kleenex alert" with this one! This is classic tradegy at its best, hitting hard and fast. Very nice, indeed.

Ted

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on February 3, 2007

Excellent write. It is romantic yet tragic.

Karen

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Together in eternity. Poignant. Excellent. R

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2007

Powerful love story Fee. Beautiful yet sad at the same time. Loved the ending.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

"Tired, her face wears signs of age

History forgot her mortal page"
Some very beautiful lines in this one FEE!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

A thought provoking piece Felix!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Excellent write, my friend; very well done! BRAVO, Fee!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

POIGNANTLY penned, (((Fee))), well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)

Fee:

Very sad.

hugs,
Kathy

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

so sad when one heart yearns for the other...happy in being reunited, all a mystery...
Enjoyed the "Reunited Laughter RIngs"
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Felix,
As precious as love is, it holds not a candle to life.
One has to be feeling not only lonely but devastatingly lost and shattered.
Stunning write Felix, but oh so sad.

Lisa

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Beautiful, and sad, Felix. Excellent write.

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

your writing is superb-a pleasure to read

Reviewed by George Carroll

A Shakspearean like tragedy penned to perfection.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Felix,

Very beautiful in its tragedy. Love is endless.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

has a familiar ring to it....I know a place like that.

Thought provoking write here fee, sad but so real.

Hugs
Cherry