One Last SSSSmile (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 3, 2007

Very sad. R

Reviewed on February 23, 2007

One of those grab the heart pieces... beauty in sadness...) Myrna

Reviewed on February 22, 2007

Felix, it is so sad to watch love walk away. I can feel a heart breaking. Thank you for another lovely write.
Love your Cuz, Rose XOXO

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 21, 2007

So sad and sweet, this write Sweet FEE~
Love your heart and honesty!
Have Faith!
Being happy for the memories, is a Blessing in itself~

WArmly, Warrior Sheeeoox

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 20, 2007

What grace and stature, Felix. I cannot imagine the pain of such a "last smile or last goodbye". This demonstrates how deep love can be... deep enough to let go. Such a heart is destined for even greater things... and even greater loves. One of your best, I think. Kate xx

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 20, 2007

This one really tugs on the heart strings Fee, your sadness is palpable...
peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on February 20, 2007

What a sad write Fee. Despite the sadness, you have penned a powerful piece full of emotions. Things will get better...promise.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 20, 2007

(((((Fee)))))

Everyone sad today, forcing a smile to lips that want to turn down. Powerfully emotive writing, here's a (((HUG))) to make you feel better (and me, too).

((((((HUGS)))))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 20, 2007

A sad offering my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 20, 2007

Sad one, Fee; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2007

A poem full of saddness,A agree smiles are at times forced and you can tell if they're real are not,Situations unknown to others,
Michael

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on February 20, 2007

Even the title expresses the hard to let go feelings here...
Love such as this, saddens me to feel it was unreciprocated...her loss! :)
Oh! ...and when you least expect it, it comes a knockin'
Enjoyed...in a turn of emotional ways...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

A very sad and emotional piece I felt
Your pain and sadness
Through the page This is beautifully
Written and it brings many
Images to mind.
Just remember there is
Always a new Day And your true soul mate waiting for you!!
Love And Peace To A great poet Smile..☺
Morning Star

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

How could anybody leave Fee?? You have done a great job, now stop being sad. Thass an awduh!! Luck in Love & Long Life, 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

sadly and serenely beautiful

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

Oh well there is always tomorrow.

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

Very sad poem Fee, I felt the hurt.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

This one is a sad poem and my heart sags with your goodbyes. This one hurts Fee. I feel it along with each word.....tears!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

Captures the bittersweet that lost love is.

Bless you,
Sharon

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

'Breathe a broken hearted sigh' ... oh, such a special, sad poem of love that can never be, yet the heart beats so fully for it.
Fortunately: 'what's meant for one won't pass you by'
Beautifully written Fee!
Love and Smiles
Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

Fee,

A melancholy write..a broken heart, that leaves behind a haunting reverie...I can hear the song, The Shadow of Your Smile.

Beautiful, but so sad. I hope it isn't true!

Blessings, Rhonda