Cellophane and Ribbon (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 8, 2007

Very well done. R

Reviewed on March 3, 2007

Sad but true. I like the analogy to Dorothy and Oz.

Chrissy

Reviewed by John Perry (Reader)

Reviewed on March 1, 2007

yo bro,

I know you were just testing to see if I'm watching you. You didn't mention that Pretty Paper was written by Willie.

Later bro, June is coming.

John

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on March 1, 2007

This speaks Volumes Fee!
What a write and what a mind and heart you have!
YOU got to FEEL it to WRite it!

Peace and WArmest Blessings! WArmly, Lady Sheeeoox

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan

Reviewed on February 27, 2007

Dear Fee,

There is much truth in your poem. We can get lost sometimes in the external dresssings, in the activities, in the display, and we lose what truly matters. Fortunately, the inner meaning and value may be rediscovered, and then it is no longer "two people acting out a scene."

Blessings,
Sharon

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 26, 2007

wow....that is how it is sometimes sadly
if they both took the time and remembered what got them their maybe they would/could have a chance
sad bit of reality

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2007

FEE,
This muse was so wonderful but it is also so true many just hide behind two golden bands acting out the marriage. I loved the offering of this one.
Peace,
Josie

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 26, 2007

Felix,
All the cellophane and ribbons add up through the years...They add up to many wonderful and remembered times.
Loved this Fee.

Lisa

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 25, 2007

terrific write, fee; very well done yet again! bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on February 25, 2007

'Keep our problems out of sight
Like Dorothy lost in Oz'

Great lines, Fee, which allow the reader to take that walk between the Cellophane and Ribbon, along the Yellow Brick Road! Somehow, it seems to all work out all right, so that we will end up...Somewhere Over the Rainbow!!

Enjoyed this very much!
Love, Rhonda

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 25, 2007

Spot on truth in pretty packaging: sad. Excellent, (((Fee)))!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 25, 2007

Oh so very true this is, and how many out there put on the pretty wrappings so others can't see through it. great write Felix.
Love your Cuz, Rose XOXO

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 25, 2007

So much truth in this one Felix!!

A bright smile does not mean life is good...it's just a moment in time!!

love Tina

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on February 25, 2007

I really like this one, Fee. It was fun and full of love and emotions. Excellent job.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2007

Never knowing whats under the cover,Well done Fee,
False fronts how true,
God Bless,

Michael

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2007

A heart felt write, been there done that have the paperwork to prove it. Acting as it is suppose to be. If nothing else I was a bad (in which good) example to my own children and they have good marriages with no acting involved. I learned watching my own parent's silent marriage and that surely didn't work for me. Good write for the morning thoughts. Lady J

Reviewed by Debra Baker

Reviewed on February 24, 2007

Felix, I thought it was grand. You know, I bet it be true of so many couples. Acting out the scene, that is. Fantastic write.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on February 24, 2007

I like the rhythm! And the thoughts are thought provoking...things are not always as they appear.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 24, 2007

a gift package of commitment and love in these verses, Felix ...

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on February 24, 2007

Kewl write Fee, punch line at the end too, :)
Hey we used to use Cellophane ( Red stuff) for making pretend torches in school plays, hmmm.

:) Ch'erie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 24, 2007

great way to put it!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 24, 2007

wow! so true
pax A

By: Felix Perry

Tied up with a golden bow