Mistress Widow (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 12, 2007

A very warm and sad heartfelt story, loved it cuz. Love & hugs

Reviewed on April 12, 2007

This is so sad, yet touching, Fee, so full of love and emotions. I could feel the emotions and see the imagery coming through in your words.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

A very touching poem, Fee. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Sadden write expressing the reality of what a persons true emotions!
Had to think on it for a brief moment...which is
Very good,this piece will stay with me
Its so beautiful and the imagery i could almost see in
the single wilted white rose!!
Love It!!!
Love And Peace To You Always
Your Friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Beautifully written as it touches so many emotions...excellent Fee, a real keeper

Carole~

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

A wonderful tribute to the unaccepted and misunderstood. Families can love their father yet blame his mistress for his love for her. Lady J

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Such a sad piece. It just made my heart drop into the acid pit that is my tummy. This. . was so wrenching a piece. Leaves me feeling sorry for her. Great job here Fee, wonderful write.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Awwwww this is so nice Fee!
Romantic, SAD and Wise for you to see all this in your mind!
So clearly understood!
Tears flowed!
I felt the pain!
I have 1-Word here... "Empty"
and my heart goes out to YOU! etc.
Feel my warm Purple/Golden energy headign your way!
STay Strong and Positive!
as you reach out~
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Oh Felix, this is a sad but beautiful poem and I wish all the right people would read it and the message it is giving, I need the kleenex too.

Thank you dear Cuz, Rose XOXO

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Ohhh Fee! This is so beautiful and so sad ... my heart goes out to the mistress for what she never had. You captured it all so perfectly and your words held me captive from beginning to end. Well done!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Snuff...Pass the Kleenex Please!! I know her too...
Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Nobody feels more open to pain that when one are missing the other half of oneself.
Outstanding.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Feeling the pain of loss, such a sad way to be.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

you truly write this one with deep emotion and thought...a very nice work through poetry and a very well displayed view of this undying and yet unattainable love...

very nice work Felix....

enjoyed.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

sad, lonely and beautiful write -

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

This reminds me of a woman's love for a sailor whose first love was always the sea. She waited for him quietly for all of her days, never asking him the difficult questions. Even in his death, she could never openly claim his heart. Beautiful poem, Felix.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

love that continues to hide within the heart is indeed a sorrowful experience ... the regret of never revealing its intentions and desires is like a wilted rose in a garden of unfulfilled emotion ...

a moving and finely quilled poem, Felix ...

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Sad beyond sad.
This makes me grieve for her; she has lost so much--youth, honor, a home with a man she can freely, rightly love, and that all-important first place in his heart, even the right to grieve openly. You have said it so well here.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

it's true, waiting is the hardest part to play. very nice write.

thanks
dan

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Yes! The mourn for love continues when unrequitted love never dies. Such is immotalality for some lovers.
This is a soft tribute to the few who choose real love.
Always,
Susan

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

ah so sad Fee and so true of waiting in the wings when the heart has a victor who doesn't lay claim to it.

well penned.

thanks,
~D.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

heartbreaking write, fee; very well penned! you pack an emotional wallop with this one! bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( *tears!*

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

(((Fee))),

You take us into this woman's grief of what could have been--powerfully penned regret. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

This poem shook my heart to the core Fee but somehow I think you knew it would. I feel like cutting down the spectacular climbing white rose in my backyard but won't. Instead I'll take a cutting from it and plant it in the yard of my new home. Who knows, someday I may need to take one of the blooms and lay it on a grave. Pass the Kleenex.
Hugs,
Marcia

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Felix, I love the story within this poem! And your rhymes are wonderful...I wish I could do that!