Two Half Empty Wine Glasses (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on April 17, 2007

Powerfully captivating. R

Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

this one torn the heart right out of me, hit like a ton of brick.
Love & hugs

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Wow...talk about heart wrenching!I am stunned. This one hit like a frieght train Fee. Great piece!

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

You wrote this with such power. This is a reality to many people, especially the wait and then the ending, the disappointment. You have captured the moment accurately and perfectly.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Gloria Gay

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

A little slice of reality and life. A well realized poem that captures the sadness of a single moment very well.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

I can relate to this one, and
it was long ago..
Excellent write, but is sad.......

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

Fee, excellent piece of writing...you had me going with you to the very end.

Thanks
Dan

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

I'm with CJ, Felix... and all those who have expressed the WOW! factor. This leaves me reeling and speechless... the ending is just so powerful, given the excellent build which draws us in phrase by phrase. Such a real write - THAT'S what makes the ending so shocking... as to which way round the circle death might be intended to strike. I hate that it should be so sad a poetic expression, but, have to say, as so often with your melancholia, this is one of your very best. The writing is so taut and measured. Excellent, Darlin... and hurry back to the warm! :)) K xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

Oh My Oh My....brilliant ending....wow!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

Oh, drat!

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

Oh this is good! ...and your ending sent my mind to a murder scene...and then it flipped over to a crying towel with a sad muse to mutter...and then I realized it was your write! LOL!
You sure have a way with words!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

Powerfully conveyed, Fee!

Love&hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

Wonderfully written Fee. The last line, to me, expresses what the writer is feeling about how he himself will feel the next morning. Am I right mystery man? I love the journerys your poems take us on.
Marcia

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

sad tale...whose dead, you or them?

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

the ... at the end lends a mystery to the memory. I've heard tell stories like these all my life and I could not imagine what that would feel like. Tragic moment caught in pen. Lady J

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

Fee,
Sad, but awesome write, my friend. I love your stories in poetry form. What a wonderful talent you have!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

much feeling in this sad write.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

very sad-but a lovely write

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

Felix, this is so sad yet so beautifully written, it brings tears to my eyes. I would too wonder what it would be like to wake up dead.
Thank youdear Cuz, Love Rose XO

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

A sorrowful tale, Fee, but as most of your writes are, so well told that we feel the sadness, it's palpable. Exceptional write, my friend.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

As always the one in the other side of the street, my glass never is half empty, always half full...but that's just me.
If you wonder how is to wake up dead...try a night of Tequila in Acapulco with a fiery se�orita for company. oh brother!!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

Felix,

WOw! this type of let down can be devastating to anyone. Sometimes I just have to ask the question; They shoot horses don't they?