Sappy and Trite
I was told I write sappy romance
That my work is sometimes trite
I thought about it long and hard
Decided maybe they were right
For I don’t plan out every line
With reference books at my side
I free write from my own heart
And I don’t think my heart has lied
I’ve had books that I’ve had published
Composed songs that made folks cry
I’ve written poetry it seems forever
And I’ll keep writing until the day I die
I’ve been critiqued good and bad
In the press and one on one
Hell, every one has an opinion
Sometimes it’s even kind of fun
So yea, maybe at times I get a little sappy
As well at times I may seem a little trite
I just don’t give a f*** what others say
What I feel is what I’m going to write!
Love you Cuz.
If PPL don't like what you write, that goes for all of us, My Stock answer has always been " you don't have to read it"
Onya Fee Take care..Keep romancing the stones, they might answer one day..
Hugs
Ch'erie
~hugs~
Karen
Couldn't say any clearer Fee Fee...
YOU bet you buggar'
I Like Variety and YOU seem to
have enough of that and then some my sweet friend!
Just be YOU cuz, It's your heartfelt feelings
we faLL for! Sometimes very deeply!
STay Strong and Positive!
Happy and Healthy!
-Always-
Warmest HuGs, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
xo Taylor
Susan
Thanks Felix, Love your Cuz, Rose XOXO
Peace,
Bill
And wot's that line in little print... ain't got me glasses... does it say "up yours"??!
jusKiddinasusual Kate xx
AND, HO HO HO!!! Just to make a point here, I mentally slipped in a BIG Freudian way to think I was reviewing ANDY.... Won't he just be the happy one!! :)))) LOLOLOL
Guess that means I have no cognitive recognition of what has been meant by the suggestion when it comes to your work, Darlin... and that's the honest truth... for what it's worth... Not HALF as much as your precious writing, Felix, so you just keep pumping it out in the very fine measures that your big heart dictates... Just love it! :)) Kate xx
Me not going to repeat the Fig-a-lo-comfort-word...but you can bet your money on it....i feel the same....write your heart out OKAY!!
Love Tinka
I love reading your words because
They come right from your heart
And that's the best poetry, the one that
touches the readers soul
and that is what your poetry accomplishes
And a dictionary can never accomplished
That!!
Excellent message Fee
Love And Peace
Take care your friend...Morning Star
Thanks,
Dan
"Sappy and Trite"
Amen my brother...me too straight from my heart!
No need for books and might I add why should we have a dictionary at
our sides to read poetry~now that is trite...only one little ladies opinion...smile~you tickle me~I like what you write.
Fuzzies...from your friend,
Gwendolyn
From the Heart...only way to go (for me)
With a wink ;0), lots of love, and a huge {{{{{{{{hug}}}}}}}}}
Alexandra*
Elizabeth
"I just don’t give a fuck what others say" great sentiment!
"Composed songs that made folks cry" -- to elicit feelings, no greater gift. One man's (or woman's) sappy is another's soul.
"What I feel is what I’m going to write!" Can't think of anything else that I could write about.
I've had criticism too, but always with a positive turn. Can't say I like it, but sometimes it improves me. "Sappy and trite" has no positive turn.
My husband always gave me those romantic birthday and anniversay cards - I'd grin and say silly, but I never threw one away. Wouldn't I love one today.
Write on, dear Fee, but like your friend Karen Lynn says "Don't get your blood pressure up" -- you can't afford that.
hugs,
Kathy
KEEP WRITING as you feel in your heart. That is YOU. We all love you and your writings here in AD. I've always thought AD was like one big family, and I feel honored to be a part of it. I've been touched by many of your writings, my friend. You have amazing talent. Keep up the GOOD work!!!
Many blessings,
~Linda
Wasn't it you who told me to write wht I feel? Then do it. :) I don't think your romance is sappy OR trite. I wish I could write romance the way you do! Sigh...but the words just don't come. Please, if not for any one, for me? Keep writing your romance, I will fall even more in love with you and your poetry! 'Kay? Frustrations easily felt and read. Well penned.
(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.
What I feel is what I'm going to write!"
You tell 'em, Fee! Good on ya! Rant on, I hear ya.
I happen to love how you write, you write movingly beautiful poetry that touches the soul. (At least mine, and others here, I'm sure.) Anyway, Fee, you felt you needed to rant; seems like quite a few of us have been doing this ourselves, me included. You write for you, and you keep on writing! As long as you write I will read! (And review! :) )
Emotions runnin' high here; a powerful poem you have penned this morning! (Just don't get your blood pressure up, okay? I'll try to keep my b/p under control, too. I can tell when it's up, don't need to get it all crazy now, do we, hmmmm??) Very well done; bravo, Fee!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Critique with the intention of inspire and give a feedback is Ok.
A put-you-down-critique is a waste of time and paper.
You are my brother in letters, and for me you write just fine and I wouldn't change a iota.
But do me a favor, dont get inspired by a schmuck!!!
Georg