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Peaking Oversold
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Have you ever looked back and thought, gee if I had only started this when I was young..., whether it is your hobbies, having a family, a career, writing, acting etc? That is what this write is about.


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Peaking Oversold

By: Fee

 

Fame foothold

I’ve been often told

My song maybe going gold

My best selling book all but sold

Movie contract, a screen play bold

Worst comes to worst make me a centrefold   

Just need to make enough for my billfold

My name known in each household

Golden star above my threshold

A lovely sight just to behold

But sadly I’m getting old

Maybe time to fold.

Feeling cold.

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Peaking Oversold"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 22, 2008
Yip...been think alot..specially about certain things!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on March 22, 2008
Yes..I can relate to this, but sometimes not having the luxury of youth any more can be the greatest motivator to finally getting things done. Love, Diana.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Excellent thoughts here, one I think all us old-timers can relate too. I like the way it sort of rises, peaks in the middle and then tapers back down, just like life itself. Well-done, Felix. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Even old timers can dream eh? me thinks so Fee ;)
age does, as Leland said, 'ferments and mellows
to reach prime'...

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
A mesh of humor and truth. I agree with Sheila's sentiments. Experience for a writer, like a fine wine, needs to ferment and mellow to reach prime.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Great write reminding us to follow our hearts, live within our niche, and never give up!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
never to old! My Aunt Flossie is 97, and let me tell ya,, she puts me to shame,,,,,:) so go for it Fee!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
When you are dead...that's when you're too old to shoot for a dream. Though, I know the feeling you write about and it can oftentimes be overwhelming. For me, writing is the dream. I don't think my writing would have been much to share had I pursued it twenty years ago. Life experience only enriches one's work. Your works are dynamic, creative, and skillfully written...works to be proud of. To me, that is success. Grab the closest mirror, give the tongue a cluck, point at your reflection, and say, "You the man!" Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Felix as you know in my eyes you are a success with everything you have put your hand or mind to. You will never too old to fold. Great write, thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Fee, I am world famous in my house, my nearest neighbor don't know my name, that should tell something.
Have a peaceful Easter.

Georg

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
When your feeling cold, old and all but rolled into a nice little fold, stretch out for that sexy centerfold looking at the camera with mischevious eyes bold, and never put a for sale sign on your threshold saying sold, for your words ring out like waves of gold beautifully caught as blessings to behold!

Insomnia and a quirky mood has me responding to your touching poem with a twisted reply back and an apology in advance if I broke some breach of writers etiquette and since I'm just a baby poem writer I know you'll forgive me! Deborah:)

Reviewed by Anna M
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Brilliantly written and a lot of truth within the title. Often people look for that "peak" in life while missing out on the adventure that surrounds us."The goal is the journey" as someone said.Your verse cleverly forms the shape of a peak too, adding to the perceived irony, but I agree with Kathy - the hand is too strong to fold in the true sense! Well done and thank you.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
We all get discouraged from time to time...but never "fold"...never give up! The dreams are what keep us alive!

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Great form you used, very diffucult to end ALL the lines with "OLD",
fantastic indeed Fee!!!!! Hugs, Peg

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Centerfold you say? Interesting thought. As the Kenny Rogers song says 'know when to hold them and when to fold them.' Your hand is too strong to fold. Enjoy life's game, my friend.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Fee,
Never fold, my friend. Keep up the good work and hold your head up high. God bless.

Huggs, Linda

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Don't fold--but i do know what you mean--i get very discouraged

Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Ahhhh...Fee!!!
Now That Was Genuinely Clever!!
(centerfold-hee hee)

Embraced~Embrasse'
Vickie


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