Yea Though I... (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

Johnny's "Imagine" or Bob's "Stoned" even talking about darkness your poem is so full of lights!

Georg

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2008

No greater song to pen with death than Amazing Grace -- so glad that death has no sting for those who have taken the free gift of grace and allowed God to pay the debt. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on July 3, 2008

Oh that gargoyle...Hope you do come back singing Amazing grace. Deep and dark write here Hugzzz Ch'erie

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)

Reviewed on July 1, 2008

a classical twist; that gargoyle [or grotesque] up top.. . . .. divinations.
ness

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 1, 2008

Such a compelling pen Fee.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 1, 2008

Chilling descriptions! Fine creation! Love and Hugs:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on July 1, 2008

I love the way your mind worked on this...original, different...well done.

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

superb write fee, not much time to write as you know why, I'll be back on line by Monday...loved your thoughts here, take care dear...Hugs, Peg

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

I never thought of putting death and music together... It's an interesting idea!

Axilea

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

i believe it is the one thing all life has in common...death...see ya on the Watchtower

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

My favorite song, Amazing Grace. Wow, into a deep, dark cavern of the mind to pen such a thought provoking piece.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

wow,, your poem puts me into deep thought,,, Great Job
Christine

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

Intriguing! Deep and powerful. Your talent shines in this piece.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

Powerful and absolutely intriguing poetry, you never disappoint, Fee!

These are my best lines
"I stumble frightened through the dark

shadowed corridors of my mind

tripping over forgotten unpaid sins

that I thought I left somewhere behind..."

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

Great songs in this write and to be listened to over and over again. I like let it be and Amazing grace, not too familiar with the oother won, but this poem is good advice and you are such a terrific write to put words like this on paper.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

Excellent writing as always sweet Fee..thank you so much for caring about me..please stay safe and well OK..I will miss you...you have a beautiful smile never stop OK dear man......Hugss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

This one is terrifyingly penned - the hopeless.ness - until the end - Amazing Grace, indeed. Beautiful, my new favorite of yours - well done, (((((Fee))))).

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

wow, Fee--poignant words!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

This is an amazing piece of poetry, Fee, so dark, it's uplifting benefits the reader in the end. You are Amazing Grace!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

Excellent write, Fee; you're just a pup! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Hope you're around for a very long time to come! :)

Reviewed by Henry Stevens

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

Hi Fee, amazing walk through future time. How will we know?
In Bluegrass circles the most requested is "How great thou art"
although Amazing Grace gets lots of plays. Great write. s/henry

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 30, 2008

Wow Felix your mind is really working overtime, this is great. One day we will all be blindly wondering what we know we lost. Wish my pen could work as your's does. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose