At the Dawn (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on December 1, 2009

our relevance in the mirror of dawn, questioning the who of it all --peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

This is great, too, submission-able, lol, and beautiful to read.

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

'Grapefruit pink tinges of a sunrise'.. what a great visual this is! Lovely poem!

Myrna

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on November 28, 2009

A wonderful poem Fee. I love the line, "Grapefruit pink tinges of a sunrise"

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on November 25, 2009

You paint a beautiful but poignant scene Fee. Lovely work.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on November 25, 2009

I find PEACE here, as I read it twice Sweet Santa Fee!
SWEET as can be, like your soul!
I think there are many searching, from deep inside as you were!
Being Outdoors is what I am always Thankful for...and so much more...

Blessings of Love, Love and Joy, PurpleSHEExoox

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron

Reviewed on November 24, 2009

Third stanza is my favorite! An interesting rumination on these modern times.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on November 24, 2009

Soft, simple and sweet, Felix, it seems dancing-to-self is okay, anymore.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

For us outdoors-types and country/coastal dwellers, urban living can cut quite a cold, steely swathe through our hearts and minds at times. Yet there is also something magical and living about a city sunrise, too... it's desire to transform and bring to life... or soothe away the night-time ills. You have penned each verse with thoughtful contemplation and delightful observation, but the last stanza is so fresh and up-beat that it's a wonderfully hopeful note and turn to end on.... or rather, begin on! Any excuse for a tango, yes! The rhythm of life beats on with the grace and energy of every rising dawn. Love this bird's-eye view, Felix! :)) xx

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

Powerful and so true, Fee. Excellent!

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

So sad Fee. Been there and understand well. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

I feel kind of a blues mood.
There is not enough dancing going on for sure.
Very well done Fe.

John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

This has a twang of sadness,though nature's beauty always brings a song and dance to the heart, a new dawn, a new day!
hugs,Chrissie

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

Get out yer old guitar, and let the music begin!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

A sad feel to this one, Fee. The third verse haunts. Excellent writing! Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

We are the actors playing our parts and you do it so well.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

ahhh sweet are the morings this season
& all the colors they hue...
sweet poetic expression Fee
Love the dreamy romantic elements caressing desire
and of course all us romantic do :)
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

I would imagine you on the porch, with a blanked over your legs and a guitar on your lap, giving dawn a few soft tones to wake it up slowly so slowly, like a grandfather would welcome a grandchild coming out of a nap.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

Love that ending line:

"If the world's a stage...let's dance!"

Excellent write, Fee; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Maggie Elizabeth (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

Wonderfully penned, Fee.