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Lake What Could Be
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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I came to you on that midnight shoreline

Where hopes and dreams are often one

With your breathless, enticing lunar invitation

In our dreamscape just six hours from the sun

 

Words need not waste our precious moments

Your lips on mine weaves love's forever song

As bodies fulfill the magic of desire's dream

Enveloped in such passion star-blessed strong

 

We begin to make love like a gentle summer breeze

On the shores of the Lake of What-Could-Be

Butterfly kisses and soft, silky gossamer caresses

Building to a near perfect tsunami of the sea

 

To come to earth basking in each other's love

But alarm clocks synchronized with day break

Once more temporarily sated by your smile fades

...our teardrop-kissed intimacy of the lake!

　

 

　

　

　

 

 

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 Reviews of "Lake What Could Be"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 25, 2010
You have a romantic heart like no other....beautiful work, Fee.
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
Felix, romance is your forte my friend. And this poem is one of your finest. "The Lake What Could Be", has probably haunted more of us than not. Possibilities, opportunities missed of flubbed for whatever reason. This was an enjoyable read Felix. May peace,joy nd love be with you. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 16, 2010
A sweet poem, on the dreamy side, Fee. I mean that in a good way:) hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
Reviewed on August 12, 2010
Beautiful poem you have written here. Superb and beautiful imagery. There is also emotion too. Your poem leaves an impression. Thanks for sharing.

Curious to know why your first line is in black and the rest of the lines are in gray?

Also, the line "Your lips on mine weaves love's forever song" - shouldn't it say "your lips on mine weave ... "?

Oh, and the image you use is hauntingly beautiful and complements the poem well.

Lena
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 12, 2010
Lakes have always been wondrous retreats for me, and your Lake of Would Could Be sounds wondrous, too.
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on August 12, 2010
If I could convey these emotions, I'd be a happy camper. ;-) Love it my friend. x
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
Oh so beautifully done Fee. Loved it.

hug
Kathy
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
Fee you are the true romantic
the love & unyielding poet of romance
Beautiful Offerings...

rick-em-rack-um alarm clocks!!
Vickie
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
Awwwww...this is awesome....THANKS!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
You're a hopeless romantic, and it's certainly evident in your work, Fee.....this is another awesome write.....light as a feather!

Hugs,
Anna
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
You sure know how to weave tender romantic poetry, Fee...beautiful!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
Always the romantic & I wish I could write that way...e
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
What romance! Fee, you've done it again! Breath-taking romance!

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
So many dreamy images and so vividly inlaid in this lovely romantic poem!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
mmmmm, this is so peaceful, the waves sing as the stars bless such love..dreamy Fee~love it
Hugs,
Chrissie
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
Fee this is a meltingly sensual and very beautiful love poem.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
Felix dear Cuz, one day I hope and pray I can put my words into reality as you do. This is amazing as I feel about all you write. Do you know how many would like to have a piece of your heart.

Love your face cuz XOXOXO, Rose
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
how beautifully penned Felix...your romance bountiful and in abundance on this Lake........ Best wishes.Neerja
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