Gray Dawn (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 22, 2010

A sad tone here, Fee, but you set the dreary, dark imagery well. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed on October 15, 2010

such a sad write Fee
hug
Kathy

Reviewed on October 11, 2010

Felix,in our personal silence the questions come and more often than not go unanswered. Our pain unquenched with reason or a hand held out in comforting posture. A "Gray Dawn". The abode of the busy or the lonely heart my friend. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on October 7, 2010

may I rejoice in his life lived
...yet still this reaches to the sorrows gates
inside my heart offering me to see that reality
and to continue to always embrace everyone
for there is importance to every path and every peril

Love's Bounty
Vickie

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on October 7, 2010

Very poignant and somewhat sad in its realness. J'nia

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on October 7, 2010

Very sad indeed sweet Fee ..Hopefully this will pass...keep smiling always..Hugss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 7, 2010

Sad and Gray, Indeed.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 7, 2010

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!! TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on October 7, 2010

I like the simplicity and feel of this one, Felix

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

Sad words indeed Fee. Good write.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

Oh Fee, been there many times, but we must forge forward. I sure hope you are okay...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

You have created the perfect ambiance for such a sad occurence, Fee. Very poignant. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

Sometimes we hear better from the heart than the ears~
Hugs,
Chrissie

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

Eloquently said Fee, you possess a skill we all admire. Thank you. Dick

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

The picture is so sad, lonely.....the story you've penned must indeed be the thoughts of the person who stands alone at the rail..contemplating.... I have known so many touched by depression...and I've heard a few of them express the sentiment here....beautifully done, Fee. Touched my heart!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

Wow, this is so well-done in melancholy tones ~
So sad and painfully realistic.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

sad, but oh so beautiful.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

So simple, yet so elegant, both in image and in verse. Very nice, Fee; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

Yep, gray dawns and days can be quite depressing..e