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Walking with Ghosts Palm Sunday 1461 part 1
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This is part of a series of poems dedicated to the memory of the men who fought and died in the biggest, bloodiest and longest battle ever to take place on English soil. It happened during 'The Wars of the Roses' over 500 hundred years ago. It should not be forgotten, The Battle of Towton Palm Sunday 1461.


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Walking with Ghosts


Palm Sunday 1461 (Part 1)

 

Today was cold and heaven had a sombre slate

sagacity about it. As if it knew, not to let the

sunlight gladden the daffodils bloom that lay

sparsely regimented amongst the hedgerows.

The road leading to Darce’s Cross 

wound past the ‘Crooked Billet’ public house

across from which, in a field, stands a medieval chapel,

where used to stand  the village of Lead

a witness to when snow turned red

fitting then, that it rhymes with dead.

The road undulated along, gently down,

gently up, for a about a mile until

I came upon the cross, solitary

in the middle of emptiness, except

for the prickly hug of a Holly bush.

Adorned in Roses, White and Red

and bunches of flowers, no notes,

flowers saying all that needed to be said.

From this sentinel in stone

I looked over fields once of heath,

now ploughed, furrowed and barren, unrevealing

about the dark history that lay beneath.

Along the route of rout I walked

and noted shrivelled empty hearts,

hanging from skeletal briar

like bad memories lingering on

when a skylark arose in soaring sweet song

then stopped in silence…as if something wrong.

 

For this is Towton Dale

and here, Palm Sunday 1461,

amidst a snowy gale

two vast armies did meet

the reapers scythe,

ready them both to greet.

Fired by vengeance murder and hate

battle was joined for ten long hours

and by the eleventh  28,000 souls

were queued at heavens gate.

 

In a raging blizzard they say?

Who would have thought that winters

last attack on spring

would help decide the fate of thousands

and who would be King?

on that bloody holy day.

 

I halted and perused this landscape vast

trying to imagine the horror of that battle past.

When a breeze like breath spoke to my spine

and neck hairs stood rigid, like needles of pine.

I thought I heard the whispered rasping of whetting steel

and the ambiance around me took on an eerie feel.

But the more I looked at that muddied field

the more I began to yield

to the vision that now assaulted my eyes.

Rust brown mud transmuting into rivers

of congealing blood beneath black carrion skies.

 

 

P Williams © 2005

 

 
 
 


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Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2005
Paul
This a Very moving heartfelt poem and tribute of history that should Never be forgotten. It lifted the hairs on the back of my neck and I have chills all through me as well tears swelling too.
Very Touching! Very Powerful! Wonderful Tribute poem
Thank You so very Much
Tracey
28,000 in 11 hours. A vision that assaulted eyes.

Reviewed on April 5, 2005
Paul,

The quintessential tribute - exceptionally composed and written ... superb!!

Best regards,

Robert

Reviewed by M Flack
Reviewed on April 5, 2005
The games that we mere mortals play out on the field on life can seem vague and empty. And on reflection they do indeed become such.

This is a powerful and well-written tribute to those lost souls who were but puppets in the hands of their masters…

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on April 3, 2005
Paul... thanks for commenting on my work and I am so glad to have found your incredible work here. Particularly taken by the gripping nature of your poems. Best, Dawn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
Totally captivating, Paul. This is a history lesson in verse for me. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
I folded to sadness as I read your words. A most powerful write, Paul, with exceptional imagery and a tone that sets the somber mood effectively. I also liked the ending of the poem very much. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
A stunning, powerful write Paul...
~Carole

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
Splendid penning, very powerful and descriptive.

Joy and sunshine
HH

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
Intensely powerful and well-documented, Paul. Your use of diction and narrative form lend a grave nobility to your subject which honours it well. So evocative and you take us right into the moment which is eerily suspended, merging past and present. I will look forward to reading more in this series. TY Kate xx PS For ignoramuses like me, just a little comment about the details of the situation would enhance the impact of these poems even more... sorry, our American friends are probably way more knowledgeable than I am... :)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
intensely riveting ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
And not too long after the battle of Agincourt, in 1415.
A wild guess, but are you like my neighbours whom reinact these battles. Plus understand the strength of locked shields..Which the police still use today..

Imagine the pain as the slain lay dieing..Oh for the good old days,,Rule Brittannia..

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
You really pulled me in with this one, Paul. I sat stunned as I read and my heart ached for all who parished in that tragic battle. Thank you for this tribute and for remembering them all. Very skillfully penned.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
Powerful Masterpiece Paul!!

I could feel this powerful piece deep within every

inch of my body... as goosebumps covered me up totally reading this!!

Well done Paul!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
Paul you write with such intensity it haunts! This is beautifully and powerfully done in an outstanding poem that should be rewarded! Bravo!
Thanks for sharing the history we tend to forget!
Eileen

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
Powerful! I felt shivers when reading "...the whispered rasping of whetting steel". I could hear that sound! The farmland must be fertile from the blood shed there centuries past. Superb writing, Paul...


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