Mother of spirits, of music-babes
dreamed pure as breath of secret dawns,
your flesh-eyes are the spinning lights
of Gemini. And your far-seeing third eye
the whispering planet of Venus.
With hips like Africa’s rocking cradle
and breasts like sun-ripened roses
you lie dreaming in the desert,
the diamond-cleansed milk of your soul
giving strength to infant voices,
the star-nourished fruit of your visions
squeezing overripe poems out of ancient prayers.
In my ring of kef I step back
to cold Christmas mornings when heat shed my flesh
to rhythms of my love for you.
We danced a cosmic dance wild and divine
and you were the song I always sang best.
I was the spell of burning tongues
you most loved to cast––
the sweet and the sweet, you and I,
slowly seducing time’s fascination with itself.
Almost immaculate. Almost angels.
Within our blessed embrace
Love giggled and shined tirelessly,
always eager
to give her perfectly flawed self
to her other perfectly flawed self.
Aberjhani
(author of I Made My Boy Out of Poetry)
© 12/20/2005
Bright Skylark Literary Productions
blessin's, and best new year ever to you!
cynth'ya
No wonder scrolling down reveals "breathtaking" again and again.
I gotta get t'work!!! May 2006 bring you blessing after
blessing. With awe, respect, and affection, 'Pea' PS: Forgot gratitude. Here 'tis! ;)
Saved this one..thankyou Aberjhani!
Vesna :)
"Blue Madonna Rising" takes one to fly on wings of imagination under the clouds of intuition, and brings one to land facing the rainbow of creativity on the garden of the Poet, where one can breathe scented moments of wonders.
Thank You, Master Aberjhani for showing another flower to enchant and educate us on our journey to beauty.
In gratitude and reverent admiration.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Regis
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
to rhythms of my love for you". Concepts like "wild" and "divine". You take us through your final words: "Almost immaculate" "almost angels" but not quite we're perfectly flawed, and so is life and love. This brilliant piece of writing, is deserving of study. Thank you for this poem, and for getting my brain in gear. You made me want to write. You really did!
Carmen
You are an outstanding talent!,..an awesome spiritual man with
the obvious gift of expression and I am delighted that you share
these beauties and more wise as a result.
be blesses with all holy beauties and real joyfilled healthy life!
peace',
Rich cetaceas son;',...criso
Take care,
Sherry
enjoyed
William ....Peace
to her other perfectly flawed self..."
And we are all perfectly imperfect.
A joy to read.
divine thoughts & visions ... the images are awesome ...
God bless,
Sandie.
Carole...love and peace
and you were the song I always sang best.
And you sing these wondrous poetic words very well, too, Aberjhani.
Love Tinka
Kate makes some very good observations too..
It is masterfully written, one can feel a tad of your own personal history..
Have a Very Merry Christmas and another stunningly creatve New Year my friend.
Paul;-)
How incredible your vast knowledge is to allow you to conjure up such a ripe and luscious fruitful offering of sublime love perfected in divine places...
Is this a perfect poem of perfectly flawed perfection? the conundrum, I say with the caveat, if there is any flaw, it is perfectly flawed. Your astonishing poetry ,and your last lines
made me say that;-)!Now I'm pondering if I said it right,all your
fault!;-)
Christmas blessings to you and yours,
Eileen
This makes my heart soar. Such imagery, such power, such...I don't know, love in your words--a tour de force, this write. A masterwork!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Merry Christmas!