Aberjhani,

Incredible write . . . exceptional all the way!


Best regards,

Lance

I'm so happy I didn't miss this profound Poem Sweet man!
It was said with reverance, strong and forceful!
The imageries stand RIGHT OUT! YOU sure do seem to know... BE SAFE!
I wish you the BEST the Lord, Life and Love can give to you and your loved ones Aberjhani!
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passions Soulful SHEExooo

STay Positive!

I love those powerful "But this is..." parallels. So much said as a story I almost didn't notice the beautiful and controlled structure to this emotional "look back" - Reminds me of my song "All My Bridges Have Been Burned" (demo-ing out now) And, I can relate to those N.Y.C. lines--was there in the 70-80's practically living in the streets...but still fond memories...Learned today I'm actually older then you by 3 years; that sucks!
Later, michael

I loved the description of walking the NY sidewalks that could be about goodtime or switchblades thirsty for your blood. That is so true of almost anywhere in this country--others too. For me it means sitting with my back to the wall in a resteraunt and always checking everyone out that walks my way while being aware of who is behind me--always alert helped along with leftover PTSD from Vietnam.

I. l o v e. y o u r. p o e t r y. Often use "daze" myself {which of course indicates brilliance;0). Among the numerous brilliant touches in this one piece alone: "thumb through my thinking" "tailored for good times and smiles" "gesture of holy forgiving" "painted sounds" . . .I repeat: I. l o v e. y o u r. p o e t r y. YOU, dear kind and talented and dedicated sir. YOU. Always and Then, Phyllis

Profound words from one who walks the walk I see.

The plaudits for your work are many and I wholeheartedly echo each of them. Very moving. From your core being, filtered only by your great skill at putting words to paper.
Warmest regards,
Leland

I applaud you, and I send a hug to you for the poem, "Coming Home". It is very moving to the spirit. You captured my heart with, "In New York, a sidewalk could lead to laughter....or they could lead to switchblades." The entire poem is extremely moving, and it was written from your heart. If you have time, stop in and visit my site. I am a fairly new author on this board.

From up here I can thumb through my thinking
as if reading the pages of a hidden history.
I can touch all of my beauty and all of my
ugliness with the same gesture of holy forgiving.
And I can talk with my death and laugh
with all the painted sounds of my entire life
about the love I want to give this world.

I particularly love this stanza, Aberjhani but the whole poem is a fine gift well-shared. Congratulations and thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Thank you for sharing this truly "Sacred" poem. It touched me deeply Aberjhani.

Good Morning Aberjhani & Congrats On The Book!!
This Poem Is Poetic Soul Food!
A Delight To Read & Feel
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Truly, it's a gem. Thanks for sharing it.

I truly love this work--especially the final line-powerful

Out on the street, this is where it's happening, this is where it's at, we are told, but no one told marcel proust in his cork-lined room. Things last too long or not long enough, said Mr Wilde. Walk don't walk, a walk on the wild side, a walk around my father, a walk in the park, sidewalks of america, we are walking to be walking and taking to be talking and writing to be learning who and what we are; what's around that block? where does that road lead? who is that poet who will walk us back to life? On a crazy pavement, I figure it makes sense to turn the corner and go down a shady lane where the best bookshop in the world stocks all my favourite poets. Here's to sidewalks, Abherjani! kenny baez

Reading "Coming Home" was like to listen to wisdom and beauty in true recital in a Party in Homage to Minerva, and watching the world understanding how The American Fine Letters are Honored.

I salute You, Poet.

In respect and admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Wonderfully unique style you have; I thoroughly enjoyed reading "Coming Home."

I can touch all of my beauty and all of my
ugliness with the same gesture of holy forgiving.
And I can talk with my death and laugh
with all the painted sounds of my entire life
about the love I want to give this world.

Aberjhani, you are sooooooo good!!!

This is very beautiful and touching.Thank you for sharing your poem.

Edwin

This is marvelous, Aberjhani. - gene.

(((Aberjhani))),

It is a pleasure to open my door and see you standing there, with a powerfully moving poem as a gift - well done. Welcome home. You've been missed -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Aberjhani - Loved this profound poem of the spirit. Especially the seeming paradox of the ending lines.

But this is a different kind of thinking.
This is the loving we were all born to die for.

This and Luther Vann's paintings! Expect my order soon. - David

(((Aberjhani!!!!)))

Welcome home; you have been MISSED!! So marvelous to read/review you again!! It's been ages!! You haven't lost your touch; you're as talented as ever!! BRAVO, very well written and presented! Enjoyed emmensely~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

So vivid! So incredibly beautiful! You need both kinds of "growing up" to be truly, completely human. I love every word of this poem, a poem of life and love.

Axilea

You still have the power of a mighty pen, Aberjhani,and it's a pleasure to read you again! All the best with your book!

ET