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Memoir
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Garrison Creek mourns
memories of bare feet slicing time
swinging on a hemp rope
worn smooth by childhood
then falling
falling into cool laughter
The tree’s gnarled trunk’s twisted veins
swelling in the heat groaned
beside our weightless joy
We feasted on wild blackberries,
staining our lips for a pubescent kiss
While my brothers built a fire boiling water
for craw-daddies under the bridge
and swilled pirated beer against
mid-day’s sweat
Their old Lucky Lager beer cans
are buried under the mud, as well as
RC Cola and Nesbitt Orange bottles
sipped during late night summer trysts
remembered in my sister’s key-locked diaries
Secrets of her round script are lost
in stars that hold them
Along with the innocence within the lofty loops
that left so much space for romance closed
in life’s unfolding
She fought until death against matter
that pressed her between the pages
Sighed one final breath at the close of summer
Before floating down the creek
on an overjoyed inner-tube, free




L.G. Figgins © 2009











 



 



 
 
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Memoir"
Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on July 19, 2009
This is so beautiful! It made me cry, and remember good times past, growing and learning and loved ones lost. Fond Memories are one of the joys of life.

Take Care,
Pierre

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
Oh my...very beautiful indeed sweet lady..have a wonderful and safe day...Hugss

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2009
Absolutely beautiful! Holly

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
Truly filled to the brim; this is exquisite.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 7, 2009
Totally fabulous... I can only gaze whistfully on. This is my kinda Katy-did. Really taken with your sister's secret notebook... and even perhaps a little saddened by a more sinister edge to the finale, if not deeply tragic... I hope I'm wrong. But I pick this up in your choice of words in the first line, too. If not, this is doubly potent and poignant. Whatever, Linda, this is classy writing. Rich and wondrous for certain sure. xx

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 7, 2009
this is a keeper love the sweet nostalgia

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 6, 2009
A very sweet trip down memory lane, Lin. The craftsmanship of your words is wonderful. Great job!

Anna

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 6, 2009
A masterful pen, Lin, very, very good work.
It captures youth.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 6, 2009
I love nostalgic writes, and this is a grand one; and I really miss those 'good old days.'

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on July 5, 2009
Wonderfully written, Lin. Though in a different place at a different time, I remember backyard "kick the can" and "higher than the ground" and "it". I remember hidden childhood kisses and the first touch of a girl's breast in the basement.
Thank's for the memories, Lin.
Mark.

Reviewed on July 5, 2009
Oh so sweet to see into the past of "Memoir" so truly beautiful Lin!
I Love The Photo Too!
Peace & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 5, 2009
Wonderfully sad, a tragedy in those childhood days. Gripped me like the shock of the first dip in spring waters.

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 5, 2009
Wiping teardrops from the corner of my eyes, this one triggered a floodgate of my own childhood memories to play before me. Yes I remember those days at the lake, and Nesbit Orange pop, and the first flirting and kissing of girls when a few mouthfuls of any kind of alcohol would automatically make us drunk but me thinks we were more drunk on youth and life. Thank you for the shared memories...
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 5, 2009
Old times are better than new times, because now the sadness are enhanced everyday by everyday tragedies and hardship while old times memories have innocence and always happy endings...

Georg


Reviewed on July 4, 2009
Another magical memory, Lin! Very very nice!

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
YOUR PHRASES AND IMAGERY PULLED THIS READER INTO YOUR STORY AND THEN FED WE WONDERFULLY. I ENJOYED THIS REALLY WELL WRITTEN WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE

Reviewed by Carol Grace
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
I love it, Linda. The words you have chosen are so right, and the imagery so colorful that I became immersed in the beauty and the sadness. Great, great job.
Carol

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
What a gift you have. Gene is right on the button! The photo brings back a memory at my grandpa's cabin. What fun. Never drank Lucky out of a can but I remember the 11.5oz bottles and the puzzle under the cap. Follow Gene's advice this is really good. Patrick

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
I must say I envy you Lin for this exceptional poem! so exquisitely remembered,the imagery is splendid!I have similar memories,and wish I could share them like this!



Love,

Eileen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
Sounds a time I could have as well enjoyed...ah for past pleasures, they seem to scintillate more than present ones...ed

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
It does seem like those times are from another world, Linda. You have evoked the memories and the aura of those days of youth most effectively via your verses here. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
Linda, Linda, Linda! Absolutely marvelous. Cries to be published.
You take me back to those innocent uninhibited days...

swinging on a hemp rope
worn smooth by childhood
then falling
falling into cool laughter

Thank you for this. -gene.


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