As a boy even his play was well ordered He would never use army men and Indians in his mock battles. That didn’t make sense both were from a different time His toy soldiers were lined up according to rank always at the ready
His building sets always had to be completely built with just the right amount of windows and doors When he played with his girders and panels play set all the panels had to match, while his older brother would just slop something together just to destroy it.
He always played alone because of that. Playtime was recreational but it had its rules and he knew someday he would pass these values on when he had a son.
Years later when after his son was born and a bit older he would go into his room to clean up. There on the floor was a platypus of scattered toys Lincoln Logs half built, erector sets framed out in disarray Legos that looked like my brother came in and destroyed half the building Army men and cowboys all standing together battling Indians in a sandbox with just One army man laying down. Other times it was transformers or GI Joes facing off and again only One GI Joe laying down
He would walk out of the room shaking his head It just didn’t make any sense The scenes all seemed so random He remembered back to his childhood and the many soldiers that lay sideways on the floor after his battles Now that was realism Why always just One he wondered But hey play was just play and his son was not him So he just let it pass writing it off to a different imagination
It wasn’t until years later when his son got sent to Iraq and word was sent to him That he finally understood about the half buildings and the sand box and The One Soldier Laying Down
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Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2007
An extremely well written poem! I take my hat off to you with this one! Holly
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2007
"No greater love exists than the one who lays down his life for many."
Sometimes I wonder if we can even know. Somehow I believe so. I remember saying to myself, " I've got alot of life to live and so much to live for, no one has the right to take that away." I still believe that's what kept me going. That and paying attention to detail. Sad to be alone.
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2007
{tears}}}}}}}}}] This touched me so deeply to tears. War is not right, death is not right unless naturaly old. So much wisdom in this piece.
Light & peace,
Joselyn
Let this coming of age story of a boy named Bean take you back to a simple time. Set in a small southern town in the 1960's, encircled by a river and gleaming white cotton fields.
A wicked Cajun Fairy named Robes Pierre entered the impenetrable Magical doll land of Sha Bebe. Queen Faustina, the ruler of the doll land, thought she had destroyed him, but he's back! Will the doll land survive his evil ways?
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
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Sometimes I wonder if we can even know. Somehow I believe so. I remember saying to myself, " I've got alot of life to live and so much to live for, no one has the right to take that away." I still believe that's what kept me going. That and paying attention to detail. Sad to be alone.
Light & peace,
Joselyn
Light and Wisdom ...
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