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Whiskey Cellar

Salvaging old spirits whiskey cellar.
Hand-forged square nails.
Rusty spikes to hold together
modern-day ranch furniture.
Searching for long-dead rebel personalities.
They're just about everywhere---
you just have to change your perspective to see them.
This particular whiskey cellar was a meeting place
for old-day quarry workers, bachelor miners, and a lair for lusty ladies.
The rake makes these salvage trips.
Black widows are something better dealt with at rake's length.
Carefully pulling out the precious square heads with the nail claw,
putting them in a nail keg,
speak of boom times
and slack to those hellraisers happy to come here,
this whiskey cellar,
to escape the hornet's nest of public opinion
and gossip they had aroused in town
merrymaking well into the wee hours.
Whiskey is history, and History is whiskey.
Copyright 2005 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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Outstanding imagery and verse...I love the way your mind works. :) BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reindeer
and
History is whiskey."
There is a lot in this poem, Sage. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace.
Regis
and
History is whiskey"...that antimetabole is hardhitting. If you replace "whiskey" with "cocktail" in the last line, it MAY have a greater punch. A lesson learnt in this post, good penmanship Poet Sage Sweetwater.
Calvin Hobbes
Excellent writing; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
You will be amused today; I did TWO letter stories today! Check 'em out! :)