simply breathtaking composition!

Another one of your gems which leaves me quite at a loss of worthy words, Sage. Love and best wishes,

Regis

ms sage, this is on fire!

Ah, Sage, would that I were spinning in your orbit. Perhaps
I should have said limping. You know, dear, there are just too
many heated gems to single out any one as your best. I'm
confident that the best is yet to come. Love, gene.

. . . sssssssssssh . . .

Sage, erotic with midnight wine passion. The psycho sensual experience you have herein described. May joy, peace and love always know your path my friend. Jon Michael

ooooooooooooooooh yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah... the highest form of orgasm, that which is spiritual ignition and fusion, transcending the soul and the flesh ( I always associate the soul with a fleshly nature, somehow... it's longings seem very mortal). Such a union defies the temporal and brings the two together in an infinite blending. Totally yum... Your visual is very chocolate: what was our British flagship Cadbury's, now forever cosmically united with and envelopped by your Hersheys... And now how can I not think of the Mick Jagger/Marianne Faithful anecdotes of their Mars Bar parties....????????!!!!!!!!!! :)) xx

oh screaming!! Yes!!
Sirens & Cosmic Orgasms...Unending Supply
...and now exploding and exploring
expansions of these profusions infusing
rings...oh those rings circling around
in motion's privacy
pulled with delectations tongue...cosmic release...
connections of multiplicity unleashed...
Passion Bombs & Body Shots...Vickie

Always a heightened stars collide place, your den of awesome love, sage.

consumed by your passionate verses, too consumed to review, this is all you, and more, sun and stars, I can feel it, though I am from Mars. Hugs! Jasmin Horst

And now she eases into pleasure. Your a fantastic writer, Sage. Don't ever stop.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Oh to be the sun. Patrick

beautiful-especially the final verse!

Sage, Your choice of photo, verses, rhythm, all make this poem outstanding! I agree with Fee, this is one of your best poems.
Something to grab a hold of and take it to the milky way!!! (lol)

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

a steamy celebration of the phsyicallity of love. simple and evocative

a good write

john+

My first reaction when I read the title was, great idea for a blues song, but your words simply lit up the night, way past midnight.

Cheers,
Dan

Holy...
OMG...
Sage comes along and just owns us with this one.
I can't review this in public.
:)
Keeper. (Duh)

John

Intense Univers(e)al love-making! Incredible weaving of "here" and "out there" of erotic love.

Peace and Plutonic Love,
Dayvid

For me this is one of your best writes Sage, I felt such an intensity of sensual and erotic emotions but also an eternal like unification that melted two into one...
fee

fucking awesome poetry Sage x:o)

yes------souls decide to incarnate this way to experience this ecstasy
lovely poem Sage

FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!