BAlanCE (poem) by John Michael Domino on AuthorsDen

BAlanCE
by John Michael Domino → (All Poetry by John Michael Domino)
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Are you trying to achieve the right BAlanCE in life? Read on my friend...

We all try to achieve the right BAlanCE in life Trying to live right without too much stress or strife Then if we eat or drink a little too much in one day Our tummy is full and we feel like floating away The same thing goes for driving our cars too fast or too slow We can’t afford a ticket but we feel the need to go, go. GO! Treating our friends and relatives right is important, we know But we don’t want to be taken for granted or let down low Exercise is good for the heart and it helps us to feel almost like new But if we overdo it we can get shin splints or pull a muscle or two We try to live good lives and do what is right, honest and just Then we pray to God for wisdom; for it’s in Him we can trust! So when I feel off balance in the mist of the day I look up to Heaven and take time to pray. Amen!

Reviewed by Mary Cochrane

Reviewed on April 21, 2014

Thanks for this wonderful message John. Praying without ceasing is all we ought to do. Mary

Reviewed by Barbara Henry

Reviewed on April 15, 2014

Great poem, John,and you gave the perfect way to get and to keep the balance that is sorely needed in our lives: Keep doing the good things we do, and don't forget to pray!
Continued success/
Barbara J.

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras

Reviewed on April 14, 2014

...I try running down...an escalator going up...to get

the balance right...can't do it...quit while...ahead!

Great poem...telling what we need to know.

HAPPY EASTER JOHN MICHAEL!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Very uplifting piece, John, and sage advice to boot! Nicely done...

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Amen, indeed. But don't forget to Play and Pray.

Reviewed by audrine max

Reviewed on April 12, 2014

Balance is hard to maintain because of not too much, not too little. Most of the time, it's pretty vague. But once you attain it, everything turns to be wonderful and pleasant, as this poem is.

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

I think we all try our best to do the right things and hurt no one and I truly believe that God will always show us the way. A favorite saying of mine is, " When God closes the door He always leaves a window open". I have found that to be true so many times for so many people. They come to me and tell me they lost a job or some other problem that feels to them that they will not beable to handle and I tell them to give it to God because He will handle their problems. An excellent write. thank you for sharing .
hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

You mean like pondering the balance of good and evil on the point of a pin? A god-awful waste of time.

Ron

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Balance is indeed the key in all things..))