aha, I'm on to you now, seeing the "marbled and waxed" line here and other familiar strains. but, somehow, that makes your work all the more intriguing and captivating. again, you're pulling me in, even when I am uncertain of the source of such inspiration. well done! Dawn
Dense and image-rich, Calvin; ambitious and far-reaching. I love the mix of the concrete with the highly abstract - which seems a very appropriate "sampler" of our modern world. I am particularly fascinated by the final two stanzas which, for me, is something of a summation of the underlying "vibe" of the whole; bit of a poetic epithet in itself and very strikingly visual. Good work, both of you... Calvin & Hobbes!! :)) LOL Kate xx
This poem is rich in contents and bears some symbolistical and impressionist imagery. "The Great Sleeves of Wind" glows and sitimulates thoughts on social responsibility.
I enjoyed the reading of "The Great Sleeves of Wind"
Share
Print
Save
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
This poem is rich in contents and bears some symbolistical and impressionist imagery. "The Great Sleeves of Wind" glows and sitimulates thoughts on social responsibility.
I enjoyed the reading of "The Great Sleeves of Wind"
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love Tinka
Love,
Eileen