You have intriguing titles, Calvin Hobbes, but this is the one I chose to read. To my delight.

'Walks, dies, disappears', all pertinent to dimensional relativity...

Ah, but what comes next? Wind 'sculpts', like an artist, 'sand flows upstream', like a creator. Escher 'rebuilds' monumental perceptions, like a divine human, like a god.

Wind is Time.

With respect,

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Very rich imagery and contents made this an intriguing and striking piece.

I enjoyed the reading of "Dimensionality Collapse".

I salute You, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Sounds as if Nature plays a great deal in your dreams, Cal...Ed

More than likely I am reading too much into DIMENSIONALITY COLLAPSE but in these lines I see a haunting enigmatic parable of self-contained integrity and beauty attempting to stand its ground, or command its own space, within a reality where such qualities are sometimes carelessly, or even brutally, destroyed. However, the shining unnamed angelic presence in this poem-parable is the power of creativity capable of absorbing and transforming even the furious authority of the wind. A thoroughly enjoyable read.

Love the descriptions. Great write!

Excellent. R

Captivating imagery, Calving. Superbly created. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you.

Regis

I love the way the wind plays in this beautifully creative poem!
It took my breath away, like the wind does when it's strong;-)
Superb poem Calvin...

Eileen

outstanding imagery...whirl wind's of a mastermind!!

Love Tinka

interesting images here, particularly your concluding lines. nice to read your work. Dawn

Excellent images paint your verses, Calvin. Beautiful write!
Take care,
Sherry

good write,
srong visuals

john+