Strong imagery. I especially like "eyes spread like newspaper gossips."
A harsh commentary on our present state rings in these lines, a sense of impotency assigned to both the locked out and the locked in. A provocative poem. ~~Nordette
1) Admired the boldness of the heartbreaking imagery in these lines.
2) Saddened and angered by the aptness of the political and philosophical implications.
3) Enjoyed this quite a bit.
This poem is selfexplanatory. "Observing Nakedness" reads its
closing line, as "... to observe the nakedness of a few thousand years!" which gives me an extra thought-IN-line-Message:"UNTIL HUMANKIND DECIDES TO LEAVE THE ROAD TO IGNORANCE AND INJUSTICE."
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A harsh commentary on our present state rings in these lines, a sense of impotency assigned to both the locked out and the locked in. A provocative poem. ~~Nordette
2) Saddened and angered by the aptness of the political and philosophical implications.
3) Enjoyed this quite a bit.
really enjoyed
William .....Peace
A sharp sword to ignite the sense of freedom and cut the chain of lies.
David Livingstone
Love Tinka
This poem is selfexplanatory. "Observing Nakedness" reads its
closing line, as "... to observe the nakedness of a few thousand years!" which gives me an extra thought-IN-line-Message:"UNTIL HUMANKIND DECIDES TO LEAVE THE ROAD TO IGNORANCE AND INJUSTICE."
"Observing Nakedness" has paid its poetic dues.
Keep Your quills flying, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU