Ah Debs, so deep and powerful, the depth and soft despair so eloquently expressed. outstanding poetry.

Reindeer

I really liked this, Deb. You set the mood so well.

Bobbi

Balancing the edge of dreams and realities sometimes leaves us empty and numb cast between tides of awarness so vivid as you have penned in this natural setting thanks Poet for a glimpse into your creative mind :)

life is a reoccurance of a fleeting moment ... we begin as it starts to end ...



vivid, crisp imagery ...

Amid the fuzz and the static of sleeplessness there is a sense of movement even if we are standing still. Illusions and apparitions catch our thoughts and pull us into their surreal spaces leaving us to wonder if we are asleep or dreaming while awake. This is a great poem, Debs.
Take care,
Sherry

As Kate said, very thought-provoking. Surreal. Very good write,

Peace.

Quite powerful, Debashish.

Debs....Its so great to read you again....what a descriptive write my friend...You never let me down with your powerful writes...this is yet another fine example....Your poetries means a lot to me and so is our friendship....cheers....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!

what a description...whew

Don't like those moments when you feel like you're falling and it's only part of a bad dream.

Superbly surreal, sharp and intense, brilliant Debs.


Paul;-)

Very surreal and a vivid and accurate account of extreme fatigue... at least, in my interpretation. The drowsiness that alcohol can bring can also make for these heightened awarenesses amidst the stupor, but you have described excellently here those sharp and intense moments that pierce through the mind when all else seems to be dulled and losing consciousness. I very much like this microcosm, Debs... even if I am totally barking up the wrong tree! Excellent sharp-focussed "dream within the dream" write. TY Kate xx

"There’s no spark as the stub hits the ground."

There will always be a spark for you Debashish ... You Are The Spark!

Love & Light,
Joseph

thought provoking write! :-)