Raindrops like a thousand liquid sins
Fall cold and dampen living ground
As friends die miles away
Without a loving hug or smile
And an uncle lies in a hospital bed
In the twilight of a coma’s sleep
His life counted by ticks of a clock
The ways and means of living sap
The eternal energy’s ebb and flow
In hourly increments, meant to depersonalize
dehumanize, teaching the humility of failure.
The meaning of life lost in countless
Hours of paperwork and bullshit
while the real world is spinning
out of control as it always does
and always will.
Life and death
balanced on the point of a pen
babies born, elders die, friends
lose themselves in emotional rhetoric
and still the pen goes on, and on
writing the story that is fantasy
without the warmth of blood.
The kinship of life, and
The pearl of death, shine into
The darkness, almost as appealing
As living with the rat-race
Tears, a thousand liquid sins
Fill the well with sorrows
And do not nourish the soul
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Reviews of "Raindrops"
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2002
Sandi,
ONE OF YOUR BEST WORKS TO DATE! I love the ways everyone uses the rain to express themselves. They seem endless. Great write.
Gregg
Reviewed by Caldwell Phillips (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2002
One of the best that you've written since, well heck, can't think of the name. Something like Moldy Bones??? I really see the craft in full play here. Bravo!!!
very thought provoking and yes the pen goes on ....beautifully done
Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2002
Excellant write .... j
Reviewed by Jonathan Reed (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2002
Thought provoking. Makes you realize the frailty and shortness of life, and the circle of life.
Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2002
Sandi this is so good. I was left feeling as though someone had just whispered some profound message into my brain. The reference to rain adds a powerful atmosphere to this piece. I was moved.
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ONE OF YOUR BEST WORKS TO DATE! I love the ways everyone uses the rain to express themselves. They seem endless. Great write.
Gregg
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Thank you.
Yet, Tears a Thousand Liquid Sins, strikes a sharp chord.
Gina
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