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ELOI,ELOI,LAMA SABAHTANI
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O what a black day
Black thought clad in white
Are not calm

I crying from my pain
My life is black ink
O what a sad day
When a spark of hope
Disappears


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 Reviews of "ELOI,ELOI,LAMA SABAHTANI"
Reviewed by Richard Bowers
Reviewed on December 22, 2012
Which way shall I take the course to my reader’s hearts,
What scale and tools do I collect with,
What voyeur’s wrap I claim in readiness.
Are the ages of my father come to bear,
Or will be for next generation’s benefit:
And for sure hope luck to smile a lot,
Unless I weaken in devotion,
That I harbor this pretext,
Where course is subject to a wanton age.
Gather, flock with us; examine all to beyond:
Valiant person have surpassed our time.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on March 31, 2009
I find it nearly impossible to navigate a 150 foot long cruise ship in a 5 foot bathtub and yet reading a short piece such as this, makes that voyage so enjoyable and verily possible, in that with a few words you have depicted so much. But the pain heals eventually and the wounds transform into a beauty few can express as eloquently as you have. Beautiful work, Maria.
Amor

Reviewed by Maria Deyana
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Thank you very much Mr Hernandez!

Maria

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Nice...you captured a view within a small portion of poetic expressions...very nice...

enjoyed.....

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on January 24, 2006
i feel it too! Instead of paper or pc it's as if you write directly on our souls. Amazing write.

Reviewed by kadir aktay (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Too easy feel who has pain. If we feel your pain we can understand you. But this way not enought. That is not consolation for us. Also for you. All your poems carry your pain to us and future. To endless.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
I know the feeling, Maria. Love, peace, and strength to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on January 13, 2006
We must always keep hope alive in our hearts !
Without hope we have nothing !
Stay upbeat and strong !
Peter


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