have to run
gotta go
carnival time
and I'm selling dogs
to all the little goulies
hot dogs
get your hot dogs
sometimes I love this part
of being a mom
sometimes
but
last night
met up with some friends
and
shall we say
I’m a little cross-eyed today
wonder
if the gremlins
will smell it on my breath
or see it in my eye
when I say
buy
or get lost
you little punk
ha
not really
I’ll don
my witch’s hat
bloodshot eyes just part of the
costume
and they’ll never know
that
I wished I was cuddled up
in bed
with a towel on my head
hot dogs
get your hot dogs
wonder if I can call in
dead
could be worse
at least I'm not
in
the dunk tank
love halloween
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Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2002
Ah this is lovely, so descriptive, what a picture i'm seeing, well done, another gem from your busy pen...take care of you and yours, Mark xx
HA...it could be worse! "hotdogsgetyerhotdogs" i'm so sick of sayin' that...gonna be dreamin' of "hotdogsgetyer...awwww, shaddup!!" :) LOLOLOLOL!! this is toooooo funny! :) thanks for sharin'...been there...glad i ain't got to work hallo'een! :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
cute write, but don't scare the little kids! they may find a way to get back at you when you least expect it!! LOL love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2002
Well Josie, the dunk tank is a whole lot better please to be than the drunk tank. Bill
No dont do that, just act the way you feel. and blame it on your witches hat. Just say youre getting into the character. that gives you a good reason to say what you feel. I love it Josie. I think I'm gonna be a witch for Halloween...yeah, that sounds like a GOOD idea! Nice write and nice idea
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