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phone rings sisters voice did mom call you I totaled my car and it doesn’t won’t register wwwwhat? totaled? how when you ok double rainbows after work just gawking heavy rain pileup freeway lots of cars probably at fault couldn’t open door crawl out passenger bam totaled really messed up rental, all my Stuffs in there, live in car geez and I’m listening all quiet like thinking shit I just about lost my sister shit lost my sister doesn’t won’t register no she’s here she’s on the line she’s talking a mile a minute telling me she wishes she had some vicaden, sore it’s cool relax not lost here talking and I hang up thanking god and I’m crying because because I just about lost my sister bam that quick double rainbow quick and I think I’m totaled

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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

((((josie)))) (((((HUGS))))) to you, your mom, and julie anne...great heartpounding write...i felt the terror you must have experienced...glad you and sis and mom are okay...(((HUGS))) and thanks for sharing a scary moment...my thoughts and prayers are always with you...love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Mom

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

She is OK. A little sore, but fine. Remember that in life if one door closes, another will open, which makes life interesting. Good description.

Reviewed by Julie Anne

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

I'm here Alive and Kicking!! Josie, I didn't cry till read this, thanks for loving me so much! I love you too...Julie Anne

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

hope everything's ok. your words just hit me...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

Wow..this just floored me..so intense and powerful, I loved the last two lines here, expresses that horrible feeling so well.

Excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

Love the ending. I can't even imagine what you went through ((josie))

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

Wooooo. Hope everything works out.
Leave it to you to put this in such a fine work.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

Oh! dear glad your sis is okay!!!
Very well done write Josie dear!!
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

Josie you are the master of realism and slice of life poetry, this is good work. Powerful write!

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

great capture of a scary fleeting moment...glad your sister is ok

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

Excellent write Josie

William

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

reality sucks

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 3, 2003

Josie, good write. WOW!! that is enough to total anybody. Hope she's ok. and you also.

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