Above the land bold flags are rising,
Old men speak, their words despising
Enemies beyond the shore.
From dawn 'til sunset fanfares ringing
Echo sounds of children singing
Songs of glory, songs of war
From city, town, village and valley,
Ardent for victory young men rally
To defend their nation's cause,
Marching to their fields of glory
To repeat the age old story
And sing again the songs of war
Distant sounds of warplanes bringing
Payload of death from far lands winging
Filling minds with fear and wonder.
Far from conflict and the slaying
In churches wives and mothers praying
Their lives will not be torn asunder
Far from home the armies muster
Inspired by some general's bluster
Right is theirs, they must prevail.
And they march, so many heroes,
caught up in this mad bolero,
towards the batteries vicious hail.
Across the country cries of mourning
Widows, orphans, victory scorning,
Lament the men who sing no more
From the debris of destruction,
Flourishing among corruption
and suffering spring the seeds of war
In young hearts old hatreds nurtured,
Carried on to flower in the future.
Retold forever in tones of awe,
Legends of warlords whose endeavour
clothes in such patriotic fervour
evil that fuels songs of war.
Copyright 2003 : Ian Thorpe
Read a good article on the folly of patriotism
Does war Have To Be Inevitable
And the human cost of war includes...
Islamic State Threatens UK - Cameron
Regis
Love, Janet xoxoxo
Of course, those inane and cruel right wing, Neo-Nazis running certain countries these days (I won't name the nations, for fear of offending some readers, though I myself could care less), indeed, indeed, GLORY and "Honour" (excuse me, "Honor" and almighty Patriotism for the Homeland MUST reign supreme!
Humbug!
You've sure got balls to write incisive and
truthful stuff like this.
Thanks again, Ian!
Richard Vallance,
Sonnet Critic, Poetry Life and Times (UK)
Ottawa, Ontario, CANADA
Candy
Erin
:)
Most Excellent___ Dubya Can He Read,i.e.Majority Never Got past 3rd Grade Mentality __Most Read Between Lines To Overcome It!
Lan__Keep Up This Great Stuff As Always, Thank You For Your Comments!
Your Friend, TRASK
glad you couldnt wait .....loved it.
Q: Do you think the Bush Administration is bluffing about attacking Iraq?
A: Not at all. I think they are desperately eager to win an easy victory over a defenseless enemy, so they can strut around as heroes and liberators, to the rousing cheers of the educated classes. It’s as old as history.
http://www.alternet.org/story.html?StoryID=14701
good write
jonh +
Very vivid imagery , Ian.
Outstanding!!!!