My god, Ron, where should I start? There are layers that haven't even surfaced, yet... I'll keep this one and suspect that it will reveal its entirety in thimbles full amounts. On first read, then 2nd read, it had one effect the same: here is a poem that says far more than the words on the screen. This stirred me... wow! katy xox
Excellent, Ron. This is a wonderful poem. So much could change with just the right, or even the wrong, word. Sometimes silence is a better choice.
Take care,
Sherry
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I tend to believe you always know just the right words to make your poetry stand above the rest!
Beautiful work!
Lisa
yet has magical imagery!;-)
Love,
Alrisha
Thanks for sharing this creation!!
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry