I find your verses sensually compelling and I also love the imagery that you have used to elicit and emphasize your theme. Well done, Ron. Love and peace,
There is just something so enticing about metaphoric sensuality, and you have really captured it in this exotic write. MMMMM it is lovely. So honest!
Ch'erie
I see what you mean, Ron! This piece feels lush, and willowy (one of my favorite trees, btw!), and also cool and drawn out, hmmm, down by the pond! Like a tender wind kissing my mind...
:D
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2002
Beautiful! this is like being touched and carressed very gently.. nearly not feeling it, yet being consumed by it fully. Really gorgeous! katy.
Reviewed by elisabeth pfeifer (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2002
i love the imagery and you make your point beautifully- subtlety can be a good thing.
Regis
God bless,
Sandra.
Ch'erie
:D
and yes.....the images
*sexy
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$