Upon a Whim (poem) by Ronald W. Hull on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 9, 2015

"A good life we are in better than, it's ever been, where else can we begin, to follow our latest whim."
Your right on target!

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com

Reviewed on October 8, 2015

A "whim" of a write, yet profound in its charm in introspection. To look beneath the haze that often shrouds the surroundings of our lives is to embrace a Zen like determination, an effort to relieve oneself from the obvious impressions, attachments to suffering, pain, et al and look at all the possibilities and choices we have living in this country of ills, yet far less ills than most. Great write, Ron. I think there was some synergism going on between us as I took a different take in "Made" but posited we can all see the forest in spite of the trees, opt to take in some fragrances besides that of loss and disappointment. Your words and phrasing in this one was spot on in asking the reader to consider what we do have, not we don't. Again, great write.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 8, 2015

So Crawl With Me Out On A Limb,
And Join Me In The Whim We're In.

Sage Advice, Indeed.

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on October 7, 2015

I really enjoy your write.

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by John Herlihy

Reviewed on October 6, 2015

Some good fun here. I like the rhymes and the thoughts that go with them. Perhaps I need to lighten up too. My whims are a little too grim. Thanks. John

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 5, 2015

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE IT!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on October 5, 2015

I'm in

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2015

Makes one want to "follow the brick road,"...Quite Enjoyable, Ron!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by J. Quantaman

Reviewed on October 4, 2015

Kind of a hiphop feel to this poem. But it has a light-hearted touch. It's not insistent like some rap artists who pound you in the face with rotten fish.

Reviewed by June Marshall

Reviewed on October 3, 2015

You are such a free spirit my friend, Thanks for reminding me of the good times we can always make for ourselves.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on October 3, 2015

Let's whim it, hon!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on October 3, 2015

~Ron~
Whim it is to join in. Excellent thoughts.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Thomasena Martin-Johnson

Reviewed on October 3, 2015

I love this ooem. Ron, you out did yourself. I agree with Jerry, I'm waiting too.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 3, 2015

I CAN RELATE BECAUSE I GO THAT 'SPECIAL PLACE' SO OFTEN...ON A WHIM. I DON'T ALWAYS AGREE WITH YOU BUT I 'ALWAYS' ENJOY YOUR WORK. THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 3, 2015

On that same thought,
You really just ought,
To enjoy going out on a limb,
And doing whatever you want,
Whatever you want & only on a whim...-e-

(PS: enjoy your drive to the east & say hello to that author even if I don't know him...)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on October 3, 2015

WRITE THAT BOOK!!!

Reviewed by Eva Pasco

Reviewed on October 3, 2015

Your poem is spirited, positive, and uplifting! As important as it may be to stop and smell the roses every now and then, it's even better to follow our latest whim. When we do, life is grand! Thank you for the reminder.