Nice poetry!
"Trust in the Lord with all you heart
and lean not to your own understanding.
In all ways, acknowledge Him and
He will direct your paths." Prov. 3:5-6
Your poem is well written, but you have captured an important point in your poem. The sun has risen and the flowers bloom again, as you have said in your poem. Life never ends when someone rejects us. It only helps us to move on to form a stronger and better relationship with another person. It is painful when we must say goodbye, but think of how great it is that you have removed that cloud from the sky. How would you grow if that cloud stayed in your life? A magical poem with so much meaning.
Stop by my authors den if you have a chance, as I have written a poem about a rainbow that I saw once, and it appeared to me at a low point in my life. The power of that rainbow taught me that beauty does shine through, even after a loss.
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She was quite capable of taking care of herself...She appreciated everything he was doing for her and the Grandmothers Four, but she needed his help, not for him to take over.
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"Trust in the Lord with all you heart
and lean not to your own understanding.
In all ways, acknowledge Him and
He will direct your paths." Prov. 3:5-6
Stop by my authors den if you have a chance, as I have written a poem about a rainbow that I saw once, and it appeared to me at a low point in my life. The power of that rainbow taught me that beauty does shine through, even after a loss.
Kathy
nice work.....
Art Sun...
always,
randy