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Shepherd Man
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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Taking a walk in my new hometown


Up a country block and around a turn


I met the man, a subject of much gossip


A sheep/pig farmer and scrap metal man


 


With a fair bit of suspicion, he shook my hand


Said he likes neighbors like me


The ones who mind their own business


And let him do the same


 


Then with a sideways glance of his bearded face, he looked at me


He decided to trust me with a bit of his story


The son of a poor English shepherd-


Raised in a shack by the tracks


 


They didn't have much and refused to conform


To the religion professed by their town


Brought to his attention by the cruel words of classmates


He soon realized his status in this world was deemed below the rest


 


But he learned the value of work and to farm his family's land


At 18 years he went and fought for us all-on 'Hamburger Hill' no less


Now he suffers every day, with PTS syndrome left over from Vietnam


And knowledge that (whether real or imagined) his town is against him and his


 


So now, reduced to pig farming (he apologizes for the smell)


But the pigs pay the bills, the few sheep left; he has for love of the beast


His human dignity reduced so low, he feels there's no way up


He cannot see through choices made, his lot could be redeemed


 


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 Reviews of "Shepherd Man"
Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
You have brought tears to my eyes with this beautiful work. So reral I could have touched him and told him of my empathy with the war, my undertanding about alienation, and his struggle for "self". Thank you for a passionate write of clarity, honesty and humanity.
With my vbest regards,
Chris

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on September 18, 2007
B r a v a ~!!!! The subject could not be more important and your treatment of it is very effective. Touches the heart and disturbs the mind. . .indirectly, but very definitely, snipes at complacency and classism. B R A V A~~!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Great write Karen. You have captured him so well. Many judge by outward apparences , not looking for whats within. Wish there was a way to help him see the value of his life....M

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
A powerful and timely write, Karen. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
I second Andy's thoughts.........
you paint a vivid picture, well done.

Reviewed on September 14, 2007
You know Karen people who don't have PTS or live with someone who does can never truly understand the devastation it causes in a life. This is such an outstanding characterization and a sensitive look at a forgotten man. I appreciate this fine poem.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Great write Karen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Its a shame that others look at us in a different way, when God above made us all in the image of Himself. Thank you for sharing Karen.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Very excellent write Karen! You are a fine example of what a good neighbor is like, one with a caring heart! Thanks for sharing!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Great writing,enjoyed as always sweet lady...Hugs

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Feelings are not the truth, they just hide the truth.
It's a sad reflection on a badly programmed society where values are built on false beliefs, leaving so many feeling like they're a demi-monde...

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Anice poetic story Karen....the life of one who has given time to his country is worth more than we can imagine....God knows, and so do we.....


nice work.....




Art Sun...

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on September 11, 2007
All professions are honorable, "For consider the birds of the air" Gods clothes them. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 11, 2007
Sometimes the greatest souls and the most wonderful minds are concealed in the least likely places...great story and a great lesson.
fee

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 11, 2007
PTS is a known evil associated with the horrors of dramatic life experience, especially where war is concerned. But even in the day-to-day, people's lives can encounter the horrific...and, being individual, what's "not too bad" to one could be totally mind-screwing to another. When circumstance, personal emotional make-up and a succession of Hard Knocks in life are added to the equation, it makes characters like the brave soul you give portrait to here rise up larger than life to become the intrepid survivors they really are. Would that they could see it with their own eyes, but often their own low self-esteem is but a reflection of society's blindness which fails to recognise all they have gone through and to provide for their need. Another telling mark of the diverse fracturing of our sense of community. A powerful portrayal of social dis-ease and stigma, Karen. So glad he found you! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 11, 2007
PTS syndrome wasn't around when I finished ww2. So soldiers that had the horrors of war to live with were never treated at all for this illness.
Will we ever learn to treat our Vets properly?

Reviewed on September 11, 2007
Karen,

This is a powerful indictment of how our Veterans are treated.

"...His human dignity reduced so low, he feels there's no way up..." says it perfectly.

Still struggling, myself: no Veteran should be on the streets; no Veteran should be hungry; no Veteran should go without GOOD medical care...shame.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *USAF, '83-85*


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