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Always Good Enough
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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On Halloween morning i walked my students to a nearby cemetary to begin a writing assignment-I was moved by one of the inscriptions and was able to get in touch with the young lady's father The following write ensued

I brushed the cache of autumn leaves from the stone,


Name: first middle and last-Jennifer Dawn


Date of birth and the day she passed, thirty-one years of living


All carved in the gray granite stone


 


A few bronze roses adorned each corner


“You were always good enough,” inscribed at the very base


Those tender words caused tears to flow,


As I stood in awe of their depth


 


Back at home, I conducted some research


I simply had to know


Coming up empty on the information highway,


I finally went to the phone


 


The first number dialed brought me a father


Whose daughter could never believe


That she indeed was “good enough”


But her anguish became too much


 


I told how those words, left to a beloved child


Had meant so much to this, another man’s daughter


Whose life has been spent struggling to be


Just simply “good enough”


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 Reviews of "Always Good Enough"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
There is a very meaningful message conveyed via your verses here, Karen. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 5, 2007
i perceived she committed suicide? its good to remind the self "we are good enough" please teach your students to look for that love within themselves rather than struggle to find it in the outside world...because as you have witnessed...in the end all that matters is what she believed of herself

thank you Karen...this one is deep and meaningful

Reviewed on November 4, 2007
WOW! This was meant for you to READ and FEEL Karen!
Glad you reached OUT! and felt the powerful message within those lines and more...
Thank you for sharing so openly with us, this Blessing of a life's teaching lesson!
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeooxoo
P.s. I guess it matters, what we have left on our stone markers! Even in cremation you can still have one!

STay Positive!
Hang IN! YOU are AMAZING and I don't just blow air!

Reviewed on November 4, 2007
I was always told I was stupid, I'd never amount to anything, how worthless I was: years later, I still feel the pain, wrestle with emotions, the hurt. This one hit me like a brick between the eyes; powerful reminder to praise your kids, not belittle them. Oh, how I wish that'd happened to us when we were growing up; the damage has been done, working hard to overcome it. Not easy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 3, 2007
Karen I pray that I will one day leave this world with no regrets and therefore I tell my children, Husband and friends daily that I love them because of who they are. thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
Great re-inforcement. Great natural wisdom too...

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
To simply be "just good enough" is what many of us want to hear. I remember giving positive feedback to my children, only to have my mom say "be careful, you don't want them to get a big head." Heck if all a kid hears is negative stuff, that's what they'll believe AND the opposite holds true. Always let people know that they have value - I know I do even if I didn't hear it as a child.

Thank you for the loving reminder "that God don't make no junk!"
Kathy

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
Karen, this is a powerful message.
We always tried to teach our children
(now all grown) to believe in themselves,
that they're more than good enough. I
know myself I never could satisfy my father
it's the toughest thing in the world to
overcome, that feeling of not being good enough.

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
Karen, this is what I called exceptional poetry, it is full of vivid images, with a story that kept this reader sealed to a seat awaiting the ending. You've done an excellent job and I did enjoy this much!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
Heart wrenching beautiful and such a strong idea that the first reaction I had was to pick up my phone and call my own children tonight and tell them that they are all more than just good enuogh.

fee

Reviewed on November 2, 2007
Karen,

"Just good enough." How I wish I'd heard that...was always told how worthless I was, how stupid...nothing, it seemed, was ever good enough. A powerful reminder to nuture your kids, to instill in them positivity, to let them dream...tears are running down my face, the best tribute I can give...

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
I think your school project will benefit your students, and I would bet that phone call meant a great deal to that grieving father, too.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
A very thoughtful poem...you show the sensitivity and compassion of one who can feel with but a few thoughts the depth of another's life...the unfortunate feeling of not being good enough is a sad reality, yet the struggle for one to overcome sometimes does win...in life...

nice work, Karen...


Art Sun...


Reviewed on November 2, 2007
Very wonderful write. Lots of feelings here.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
A very hearfelt poem,, beautiful as well!
Christine

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
The depth of feeling in this pensive write leaves one to ponder how many feel just good enough.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
You connected with a person that understands. This was meant to be, Karen, You are healing that is very clear.
Peace, Love, and Light, and know you are good enough!
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Tom Kitt
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
This is very good.
Tom

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
Very touching & a most beautiful concept to behold~lovingly Ted

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
hmm, very deep and i have to agree that would be a moving experience and one that teaches us to be more understanding of just how precious life really is. thanks for writing this.

randy


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