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Promises
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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I have just now been able to write about this conversation now that my sister is doing well

Promises

 

“Don’t let me die in the hospital.”

Those words caused a catch in my throat,

Though they hadn’t been uttered by me.

My tears were check but pooled in my eyes,

As I drove quickly, but carefully,

Making conversations with depth,

As the fear of this stark reality, faced us both head on.

 

“If I am not going to make it through this,

Take me home and lay me down,

Beneath any one of the trees I so love.”

I swore to her that she wasn’t dying,

But if that were inevitably the case.

I would surely honor this simple request,

And lay my baby sister down,

In the arms of Gentle Earth.


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 Reviews of "Promises"
Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on August 2, 2009
Intense, I am glad that you can now share these emotions that can be so binding. Warmth and Love to you,Karen. Be Well, Carin'

Reviewed by Daniel Keith
Reviewed on August 2, 2009
Beautiful Karen. My prayers are with you. May God Bless You.

Daniel

Reviewed on August 2, 2009
Such a poignant write, Karen. Life seems so unfair at times.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on August 2, 2009
prayers continue

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 2, 2009
No worries, the Big Chess Player in the sky told me that your sister will be up and walking, He was saying that with the authority of someone that knows, after all, it was God talking.

Georg


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 2, 2009
The weight of being the one person at the bedside of someone we love is heavy but also a responsibility that measures the true worth of that love. I have been the last person at the bedside of a father, a a brother, a friend and a mother in law and yes I too made promises that would give comfort to those sick. I am gladt your sister recovered and you will now have time to share each others thoughts and wishes for today and for tomorrow.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 2, 2009
What an anguished plea, and how heartwrenching it must have been. I'm so glad your sister is on the mend. May she experience good health and long life.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 2, 2009
Thank you Karen for sharing good news, A PROMISE, A simple request you say. Thank you for touching our hearts.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 2, 2009
Karen, there are no words to tell you how much this has touched me.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 2, 2009
Thank God he answered our prayers and she will get well.


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