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I'm Taking Off This False Face
by Barbara Kasey Smith → (All Poetry by Barbara Kasey Smith)
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You killed the flames burning deep down in my soul, you took away my respect and left me feeling cold.

This is one of those country tear jerkers I've written & I hope Ad Readers will enjoy.

I'm Taking Off This False Face


This false face I'm wearing comes off today,
I've been living a lie and my soul I must save.
I promised I'd forgive...your wrongful cheating ways,
can't fake it any longer...it lives with me each day.

As I lay by your side at night, she's lying here too,
I can't get her out of my mind...you know what I have to do.
I thought I could forgive you and promised you my love,
baby, I've been seething and can't find a white dove.

CHORUS:

You killed the flames burning deep down in my soul,
you took away my respect and left me feeling cold.
I thought our love was special...you always told me so,
if your love was so great, why did you have to roam?
You killed the flames burning deep down in my soul,
you took away my respect and left me feeling cold.

It's wrong for me to act like everything's alright,
when in my heart, I want to do everything for spite.
I can't live a lie...It's not the right thing for me or you,
the best thing for me...is to tell you we're through.

Take this ring I'm wearing and trade it in for something new,
give it to the next girl you con into loving you.
I'm not one for breaking promises, but I cannot live a lie,
cause if I live with this false face, I know I will die.

Chorus:

You killed the flame burning deep down in my soul,
you took away my respect and left me feeling cold.
I thought our love was special...you always told me so,
if your love was so great, why did you have to roam?
You killed the flames burning deep down in my soul,
you took away my respect and left me feeling cold.

TAG:

Yes, you killed the flames burning deep down in my soul,
you took away my respect and left me feeling cold. 


Copyright2007.Barbara Kasey Smith
(Do Not Use Without Permission)

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 Reviews of "I'm Taking Off This False Face"
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
A tear jerker my friend, country lyrics at their best! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 20, 2007
Barbara this is splendid country lyrics and must be published! it doesn't get much better!

ET

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 20, 2007
Wow Barbara this is great and me being a Country girl myself can hear this put to music. Great write thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 20, 2007
Wonderful song lyrics, do you sing also? I can so relate to this Barbara, I believe we all have been there at some point in our lives.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on October 20, 2007
Wonderful counrty lyrics. Lots of heavy sadness and emotion here. I like the false face title as we all need to keep it real. :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Outstanding piece Barbara
Enjoyed the lyrics
Thanks for sharing
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Wonderdul writing as always...Hugsssss

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
You express a universal theme, Barbara. Sad but true. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Kinda like cattle and sheep and horses huh dear Barbara - they all sometimes wander off and get in trouble. This planet is rife with this sort of thing. The accessibility of pornography and sex enhancing drugs make it all too easy to fall into the trap. If people only understood the kind of curse that is propagated when people give in to fornication and adultery, especially in these dangerous days when the human body is worshipped. Well done!

This blessed me ...
Thanks!
Richard

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Wonderfully said. I imagine the words of your poem are universal inasmuch as many people can likely relate to them. Taking off the false face is akin t stepping out of the shadows of misery.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Awesome C & W. Unfaitful spouse -- I love that the False Face is coming off and not living a lie.

Kathy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
I love C&W, it's about all I listen to these days, and your tune is very good.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Well done Barbara. Country music is my favorite. You may have a top 10 hit with this one. Blessings to you.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
You have mastered the art with this one. So honest, something many have gone through at one time or another. Great work!

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on October 18, 2007
Barbara I love it!!!
I always listen to those country tearjerkers
Heart broken songs, so many are very real!
Love the lyrics and I would love to hear it
In a CD it would be a fantastic tearjerkers with a beer!
Outstanding thoughts and writing!!
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 18, 2007
Sure are wonderful lyrics to a hit Country Western.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 18, 2007
very sad song,,, I love the line,,,,
This false face I'm wearing comes off today,
Best wishes to you, Christine

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 18, 2007
Very touching piece ~love Ted


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